I am really liking this its SO FUNNY!

This chapter is cute. It's believable to see the two of them bonding by trying to cook. Chichi's comment about how Goku would think any food is good is pretty funny. Nice job with this chapter.

This story is pretty funny. Goku helping with homework-either the world is ending or it's an imposter. Anyway, is very believable that Goku would mistake pi for pie. It's cute and makes for a funny story. Good work.

Great story so far, i can't wait to read more. Please update, keep up the great work! D

Hehe :) I love it!

It's amusing, and I love how the beginning drags you in. I loved when Goku couldn't find the pancake box when it was right in his hand, lol. That sounds like something I would do.

You should finish this! ;)

nice

Awesome chapter. lol. Your right. This time Gohan is tutoring Goku. So, that's what Piccolo talked to him about.

Now I'm not trying to roast your marshmallows or anything, but some of the random things you put in, ruined the flow of the story... Other than that it was perfect... Funny, realistic and grammaticaly correct .

LOL This is pretty darn funny :D I must admit some of the random things u wrote in there made the story more interesting. Not a lot of people do that unless it's important or it applies to the story. Let's just say you can count on me to keep reading )

A little short.

lol. This sure does seem like something Goku would do. Hahaha. He catually got pie :D

I wonder what Piccolo was gonna say about Cell?

Anyway, great job!

The sad thing is I can actually see Goku doing that XD

Well...it wasn't something I laughed at, but I get it, I get the joke. It's your style that bothers me. Comments like "eeew that sounds gross" and "oh, you shoud've known" or something along those lines were like inconspicuous author's notes interrupting the flow of the narration, and very annoying. Your choice of words bother me most of all. Phrases like "who knows what" were irritating and unnecessary. For example, instead of writing "a city I don't care to name" you could put "a city" and leave it at that.
This is not a flame for your marshmallows(LOL, now that was funny), just some constructive criticism aiming to assist you in improvement for future stories.

This was hilarious! I loved how you wrote it. You have one more fan :)