This was so sad. All that pent up emotion hidden inside Kaito... He's so broken. :"[ Beautifully written, I thank you for having written it.
-cion

H-He died... TTTT So sad... wonderfully written

-from the wrong account, kuroange1 XD

Tragic and tender. Poor Kaito. I especially liked how you incorporated Akako's prophetic abilities-but why was she smiling?

Haunting! Wondering what your inspiration for this was? I'm not far into the series, but I'm pretty sure Shinichi doesn't die anytime soon! Or is this a what-if scenario?

"You used to be able to look at your reflection and unwrap Kuroba Kaito from underneath all of the masks, all of the layers you have coated the depths under. It hadn't been hard to detect the youthful man with laughing eyes, the prankster, the teenager, the arrogant fun-loving thief." - This is a lovely line. Beautifully written all the way through.

It was wonderful poor Kaito. Can you make an awesome fic of these two. With a happy ending I don't mind angst but I like happy endings.

Wha? that's all? Hmm it was nice but i'm kinda confused.. since the characters are SHinichi and Kaito i'm guessing the one who died is shinichi and Kaito is depressed because of it or maybethat since Shinchi is died Kaito lost the will to get up agaub ad continue on with his life as usual.. right?

But regardless it was a very good peice of work! Hope you keep it up with your future ones _