| Reviews for Broken Bow Book 5: The Lost Prince |
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Guest chapter 11 . 3/5 I love this story line. It was a great trip from start to finish. The only thing I think would be interesting to see is how Armani would react to Aren’s death. She’s a great character but we haven’t seen him lose someone that close to him he only gained a mother and a father. I think that the development we would see in Armani would be worth the sacrifice of a good character. |
Spidersauce chapter 2 . 4/5/2019 I just have to ask . . . Why the fuck are you having Armani roam around as Eris' little bitch? It's pathetic as fuck and extremely out of character. She tells him to keep a secret blah blah and he actually fucking LISTENS? To the goddess of Chaos? Of Discord? I'm not buying it. |
Bergholt Stuttley Johnson chapter 9 . 12/7/2018 Athena: "What do you mean you accidentally assasinated Caesar?" |
oceanluo chapter 6 . 9/18/2018 i just found out that armani is a descendent of poseidon too, no wonder he likes poseidon and why poseidon chose to save him, that may not be the reason but may be a correlation |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/28/2018 I don't even have words. I love these fics so so much. Armani is such a great character and I love how you write everyone around him. This series has made me cackle with laughter and get teary-eyed from sad scenes. You have done an absolutely astounding job on this and I am genuinely so sad to see this over! Thank you so much for writing such a dynamic story with such interesting OCs and plot twists. Seriously, bravo. |
Faeyre chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 So you are totally on my favorite authors list. There aren't many fan fics that are worthy of it! I'm glad I found this umm... 5-logy (trilogy, but with five?) |
Zeta0 chapter 11 . 5/13/2016 Yo |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/18/2016 Oh my gods is this it? ;_; I love this saga so much I wish there was more... |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/14/2016 You, sir, are an absolute genius. Your broken bow series is/was/will continue to be awesome. You are one of the top 5 authors of PJO/PJO spinoff as/PJO AU I have seen on this sight. Thank you for continuing to put the time and effort into creating new material for your readers. I do not know if you will ever see this review, as there appears to have been no updates on any books since 2014, but I hope you will continue to produce such outstanding work. - Tex |
Just Somedude 1 chapter 11 . 12/15/2015 I'll be the first to admit well done man, topped my story even. Really, good job bro, I hope to see more from you |
Toaofwriting chapter 11 . 10/8/2015 OK, I absolutely loved this saga. It was beautifully written, very well characterized, had a cute but not sappy love plot, lots of great pop culture references (loved the Doctor Who ones), plenty of humor, and a wonderful ending. Brilliant job! |
Zoanzon chapter 11 . 7/22/2015 A good ending to a good tale. Love how Armani was able to call for help, not to mention the reactions to they got up to in the past. |
jojo chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 awesome book!please write u could do one on a son of apollo? |
ieCIpp45aA1512MkRWYa chapter 10 . 5/29/2015 Eh, if you look at the previous review, what I meant was that I was attempting to review Hunter Tales. That was a test, just in case I reviewed the wrong story. I didn't, apparently. |
ieCIpp45aA1512MkRWYa chapter 11 . 5/29/2015 Did I just review the wrong story? I'm pretty sure I did. |