I love this the beginning was good and you should make more umm i would give you 4 stars

Hey!

The story has an interestng start and i had fun readng it.. Naice work btw.

! Iris ¡

Great beginning :)

Natsume must be feeling like an ass. cant wait to read what you have in store next _

I like this story, it seems interesting.

Don't bother of what other people say alright. If you tried your best then it doesn't matter. Trying is better than giving up and not doing anything. But you might know that. Good luck and I can't wait for the upcoming chapters! XD

Not to be rude but.. I can't understand the summary, although I think I understand what you imply by bits of words in the summary. I think you need to be clear with your summary, make it more interesting.. and why don't you make a prologue... It will make this story better. And also watch out for your grammar...

And hey this is just an author to author tip. Don't take this negatively. I'll make a proper review once I've read the first chapter.

PS: you can also look for a Betareader to improve your story.

~Cryslavania here_