This is wonderful! I love how you used her thing with numbers as a base for a character study. Very well done! Happy writing!

This is some great angst. I'm definitely reading the rest :)

WOW!

"She picks up the phone and makes a snap decision to reset the count"

THAT was just simply THE THING OF ALL TIMES. You could have finished your story right here, and it would be amazing already.

*goes mental*

brilliant end!

;D

I really enjoyed this! I loved the progression of how Olivia worked through the pain/agony that was left in AltLiv's wake.

I was thrilled to see you decided to give us one more chapter. I cannot adequately express how wonderful your writing is. Each paragraph was so brilliantly portrayed I could envision the entire scene in my head. And it was such a sweet, hopeful ending – just perfect.

All in all I absolutely loved it.

leave it to her subconscious for there to be a test.

so...what all happened with the stepfather? he decide not to visit this year or did Peter's buddies get him?

really good job and I LOVE IT!

any chance you'll do a sequel?

I really loved the almost whimsical earlier chapters and this was different. I did like how the little snapshots show them moving on and getting better together and in a more ralistic timeframe than some stories. Love peter calling liv on the swimming and playback to chapter 2! Oh and broyles!

Last chapter is a little different from the rest, I think you should have stuck with the 'one topic', one shot type of chapters, but, it does draw the story into a satisfying end.

Oh I'm so glad you've decided to give us one more chapter of this Excellent story! I can not tell you how amazing I think your writing abilities are. Hope your muse will continue to enable you to write such good stories!

Thank you!

Sharon

Hi there,

First off all I wanted to mention that I’m working on my own WIP right now so I’m trying to avoid all other Fringe fics until completion. Then I saw this story was updated and, yeah, I had to sneak a peek.

Your writing is flawless. The characters so wonderfully portrayed. I am loving every nuance. It’s just pure win.

Cheers and please keep up the good work.

Aw, I loved how she slowly moved on, and poor Peter! The best though were the number puzzles...

awesome chapter!

:D

This is a wonderful story! Love how it ends...with hope.

I've just read this entire thing and I love it, please continue, excited to see where they go next!