| Reviews for In Few Words |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2012 stupid |
sb4ever chapter 4 . 11/19/2011 Interesting concept and on the whole, well-executed. Good job! |
BMc chapter 3 . 6/8/2011 Really enjoyed these; succinct to the max. Nice food-for-thought in "Commonality", a different take on Teyla in "Alien", and could that be John in Antarctica in "Galileo"? |
Aphina chapter 3 . 5/7/2011 I loved the theme of these drabbles. Your decree that John was a man of very few words was accurate and you show us through these snippets just how powerful even the briefest word or action can actually be. I loved 'Me Against The World.' It was so potent and moving. It really captured my heart and the emotional conflict that Ford is feeling after The Siege. I feel like you gave me a better insight into him as a char and I applaud you for being able to do that in such a short piece. |
2AM chapter 3 . 5/6/2011 These are great... especially 'necklace' and 'antidepressant'... i'd really like to read the prequel to 'grief' though,at first I thought it was a post-lifeline drabble... but then Elizabeth walked in.. so I'd like to know what happened that upset him so much? (Not that I can't come up with scenarios of my own ;) |
ogudkfjvdkfjv chapter 2 . 2/9/2011 These are really lovely. ) So short yet each one packs a punch. |
Anon chapter 2 . 1/28/2011 Haunting and beautiful. It's a rare gift to be able to paint a complete picture with just a few strokes of the brush. I love how you manage to feed the reader information and images without over-explaining it to them. It's all about the next line, a forward movement in the writing that might look easy to accomplish but really isn't. Thank you for sharing this. |
2AM chapter 2 . 1/27/2011 Very nice mini-fics... I really liked the first one and I love the surprise twist in 'daughter'. |