| Reviews for Maximum Pyrate |
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   Silver Huntress Raleen chapter 7 . 7/14/2013 I can't wait for the crews to meet. Love the story! |
| NightxShadow chapter 7 . 7/23/2012 cool story |
| MPHknows chapter 7 . 5/18/2012 I... I never like Ella. No matter how people put her, it just... i hate her... So be glad im not complaining about her... Skye is still agrivating and confusing me... and I'm still finding Max too try-too-hard... MPHknows |
| MPHknows chapter 5 . 5/17/2012 I'm finding Max's attitude... anoying... I'm not exactly sure why, but she's just coming across too... try-to-be tough. And, i dont know whats up with Skye. It's like you're trying to make her strong and determind and all this stuff when, honestly, she's coming out to me more like an agrivating eight year old. Storyplot is still interesting, though i think it could use more build up to important moments or speaches. And, i still cant wait to see what you do with Max and Fang. MPHknows |
| MPHknows chapter 2 . 5/17/2012 Honestly, Max didnt seem as tough as i think you are trying to make her. I mean, yes she was tough compaired to woman in that time period, but not tough enough that she would terrify someone just by the mention of her name... Plus, considering what i pointed out above, you kinda made Fang seem weeker than he is thought to be. Of course, everyone has their own opinion, but... That's just how i saw it. I like your writing style, though i do think it could use a bit more detail. I cant really give a full review on this story, yet, since i have yet to read what you have written so far. I have a feeling the story line might be... interesting, though... MPHknows |
| DontWaitUpForMe chapter 7 . 11/27/2011 I'm intrigued by this story! The grammar could use a little tweaking here and there, but, all in all, it's a good story. lease update soon! |
| Noelle Seren chapter 7 . 11/22/2011 looks interesting...they should meet up with fang soooooon |
| dopeycookiemonster chapter 7 . 11/6/2011 Plz UPDATE |
| aquamisfit chapter 7 . 11/1/2011 i like it it is original update when you get the chance |
| Starry5447 chapter 7 . 10/24/2011 i like the story it's awesome |
| Zero'sFamiliar chapter 7 . 10/24/2011 Thats a pretty good chappie... i wonder if angel will do anything? and whats the deal with Angels parents? anyway update soon! thanks! Zero-chan :3 |
| Avian-American Gurl chapter 7 . 10/23/2011 LUV IT! OMG! I've been to Madrid! We had to stop at the airport there cause we had to fly from U.S to Madrid to portugal, and the spanish security guards in the airport tried to steel our money! It was so not cool... But its a funny story to tell! peace. cookies. bacon. ~Avian |
| Captain Ea Rayos chapter 7 . 10/23/2011 Wooo! I liked this short chapter since it I've a lot of open puddles. Like, who is really Skye, why arethey all fidgety (I meant the family of Max and Angel and Ella) etc! |
| SomethingAboutDarkAngels chapter 7 . 10/23/2011 Me: ha! I love Max's crew. *starts humming 'Yo ho, yo ho, a Pirates life for me'* Iggy: crap! Not again! She won't stop humming that song! Me: drink up me hearties yo ho! Iggy: your story always puts her in a piraty mood. Me: shut it, ye flying landlubber. If I's wants to sing, I shall sing. Iggy: *rolls eyes* Me: update soon, Captian xxSurfingDreamsxx. |
| YoursTruly13 chapter 6 . 10/18/2011 I like it but...I want to see Nudge O_o |
