| Reviews for The Mutant and the Witch |
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lonewolf420 chapter 28 . 5/4 This was a great story. Wish it had been finished but at the same time not sure where it was going to go after the downfall of voldermort but liked what was there anyway. |
lonewolf420 chapter 20 . 5/4 I'm engaged not I'm a werewolf? Huh ok. |
lonewolf420 chapter 11 . 5/3 Wouldn't her mutation interfere with her werewolf transformation and turn her more into a feral then an actual were? |
lonewolf420 chapter 8 . 5/3 Ok while almost identical to canon this is a chapter where it makes since. Other then the fact Gambit left behind family, I guess so did Ginny plus it was the plan and like in canon the most important thing at that time was to get Harry out of there so good job on this one. But really hoping for some divergence soon. |
lonewolf420 chapter 7 . 5/3 Sorry but you just brought up another reason that made the end of that last chapter stupid. The polijuice potion don't work on part humans yet you already said your Harry is not only a mutain but her powers where already showing them selves. So it wouldn't have worked in the first place. You just wanted to stick with canon as much as possible for some dumb reason that's thrown your whole story continuity out of order. |
lonewolf420 chapter 6 . 5/3 Ok sorry but this ending was stupid. It's a fan fiction so no reason not to have it different. Especially as they are in the USA add to that if the death eaters attack at the beginning of the next chapter there is little chance of his relatives living or rather her family as her is a she in your story and if not attacked then honestly what was the point other then to show off her boyfriend to a lot more people at the very start? |
lonewolf420 chapter 3 . 5/3 So wait. It's been to long since I watched that movie. So Gambit is with the Xmen? Why not take her to the professor then? |
lonewolf420 chapter 2 . 5/3 Hmmm is this when he was in his own, working for the brotherhood, or finally once he's with the xmen? I mean he's based out of there so he could have gone back for something or another even if it's at a time where he lives at the x institute. Time to see. |
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 3 . 11/13/2019 Does that make Remy a cradle robber? Seeing as Harry is 16-17 years old lol I'm just curious. |
Faery66 chapter 28 . 7/4/2019 Hope to read more soon. D |
Wika0304 chapter 28 . 2/24/2019 please update, it's great |
MargaritaS chapter 28 . 6/2/2018 interesting |
Faberritan chapter 28 . 4/21/2018 ? |
Faery66 chapter 28 . 1/29/2018 Hope to read more soon D |
Kittens Kat chapter 28 . 1/4/2018 AWESOME STORY! More please! Thank you for all of your hard work! |