| Reviews for Surprises and Hormones |
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thelittlepandagirl chapter 1 . 10/11/2018 Awww. So cute. |
abandonedaccount47 chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 Loved it! |
le.pechi chapter 1 . 6/18/2016 I hope I'm not too late for a review... well, I just came to say that I CAUGHT your easter egg! well, the HTTYD one, at least. "you just gestured to all of you(me)" (I wrote "me" the first (and 2nd too) time, because I'm so used to. :P) if there are others, I'm sorry, nut I didn't find it. well, Idk what the meme (from "meme-fill") is, I'm new to the Pokemon fandom. but I love your story! :D |
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 I bet Daisy was excited or shocked to see Ash and Misty together. Cute story. |
petites sorcieres chapter 1 . 4/30/2014 That was super cute ! Flustered Ash is the cutest xD And LOL at Daisy catching them |
wolfgirlnowandforever chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 I saw this on the kink meme and was really happy when I found it here on fanfiction! You really write these two in character (but aged up!) and I think that's awesome! |
November Ember chapter 1 . 7/26/2012 Super awesome! X) |
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 9/14/2011 This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique. |
1waystreet chapter 1 . 9/9/2011 this is like one of the best ashxmisty stories D |
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 nice. nuff said. |
Warlordess chapter 1 . 3/8/2011 Alright! It is my newly-found belief that Pokeshipping fans are on the decline, especially when it comes to writing/reading/reviewing fanfics! So I've decided that I shall now review EVERY Pokeshipping fic I read! Honestly, I try to give detailed responses. . . However, please don't be angry if I haven't got much to say. This is, quite honestly, amazing. So cute, imagining Ash grow up naturally (rather than being hit with a hormonal dumbell at the age of 20) and take to Misty's swimmer appearance. Their wit and banter was almost as interesting as Gyrados and Misty (which was down-right hilarious). I do agree with you, the title sucked. I, however, didn't mind the final line. My only problem with it was that you repeated the term "at least". Uneccesary, dun'cha know? Yes, other than a few misc. spelling errors, I think this fic was outstanding. I should go check out your profile... (Also, I'm sure it's gone by now, but I hope you recovered from that cold alright.) |
andee chapter 1 . 2/14/2011 aww D thats one of the best aaml stories i've read ] |
kuroange1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 XD I always thought PWP stood for plot? what plot? XD Nice oneshot though~ |
Cyantiger chapter 1 . 12/24/2010 Awwwwww! I loved it! So sweet, and cute story! |
FluteHero14 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010 Poor Ash, he's totally awkward and teenager-y. And Misty's confident Misty so it's kind of worse for him. Sigh... I couldn't find the easter egg! A clue, maybe? :) -Flute. |