Reviews for Betrayed
Boebahsaur chapter 4 . 3/25/2013
Oh man! Why did you have to stop right after their little reunion? Haha it was pretty cute at the end. PLEASE CONTINUE! Don't leave us hanging here XD
Gunslingers-White-Rose chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
I really do like the story. I see alot of potential and alot of build up. I can't wait to see what else you have in store! I await patiently for your next update.
Rinhail chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
Interesting plot you have here. I like it. But have one question, if you don't mind. In chapter three a character named Megohime is featured. Is she in the real video games/anime/manga or a OOC? Just curious.
Risus-Gaudi chapter 2 . 1/8/2011
There is something I wanted to say...

I really like this story and i wishg for it to continue.

Update soon will you!