Intriguing fanfic, hope you pick it back up again sometime in the near future.

This appears to be heavily plagiarised from a ao3 fic! Trying to find it now but if inspired by such please credit original author.

Excellent chapter! Innovative idea about Dumbledore. Frankly I would spill the beans and destroy him.
Looking forward to reading more of this story.

Interesting beginning.

This looks interesting update soon please.

Calling "Oddball" after learning that his parents had died is not something that Hagrid would do; especially not to his face. Hagrid has a lot more tact than that, yep.

This story will be done during the lifetime of my granddaughter. She is two years old.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Wow...that a lot of information to take in.
Wonder what's gonna happen next.

Confusing so far!

Awesome chapter.

Great So Far...Keep the chapters coming!

If she gets to Harrison it's going to be rather awkward as he told them his girlfriend and her family were killed... unless she says she was at a friends or something?

Dumbledore isn't going to be happy Harrison knows so much...

Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see what you have planned...
Hoping for an update soon...

Great chapter!

Honestly, this is needs a lot of work. He's shouting secret information at Dumbledore, you have time skips that don't segue well into each other, no internal monologues, and the random quotes just jar people right out of the story.

Plus the fact it's just short. Lily feels lonely, why? There's no explanation of anything. It's like each scene is deliberately cut off early. The end of the police scene is the worst so far. Followed close by whatever the heck situation put Harry in Dumbles office for him to yell at him to start.

I like the chapter very much