God this is so hard to read. This formatting is terrible. There's a reason the Jushiro isn't usually the seme...it just doesn't really fit him and it's certainly out of character for him to be so oblivious to other people's feelings, especially Shunsui

Very sweet, needs to be cleaned up a little, but very good job!

I hope to read more of your writing!

O.O'''' *bursts into tears* my heart... can't stand all these rollercoaster rides! DDDDD"""XXX I love your ShunUki stories, but my heart breaks during em all the time TT0TT

But I'd love for you to keep writing more *w*