hi! please update soon! i love love love the story!

Look this may sound weird, it's been 2 years, 5 months and 9 days. Please write more, it is greatly needed

Update

I be'd weak if she said die

Next chapter please! XD

Please please please write more? Thank you! TheLonelyDancer xx

:-D
I just read the whole story
It's really good
Please update soon
Chocolatebubbles99

Hmm interesting of intergtating Rose into the entire Narnia timeline. I only hope you "tweak" the ending so that Rose and Edmund could be together again. Please update this a great fanfic

OMG more more more!

i really can't wait to see how Edmund will react to eaustace knowing his wife. i sense some jealousy and fights..

please update soon! i really cant stop thinking about how it'll progress

XOXO

DJ

I love your story. Please update soon:)

This seems really interesting so far! Putting it in my favourites to read for later. x]

Love this story, I can't wait for more!

Everything is happening soo fast!

Still the commas and periods outta place, but the story's plot is good so I can live with that.

Just noticed this story isn't finished! Ugh, I'll be so mad when it comes to the last chapter you have up...

-LuMezenga

"I have to look my best!" "We don't have a million years!" LOL, nice way to start a fic ;D

I thought the time line wasn't really thought of... I mean, the royals come in, Edmund has one dance, and the party's over? It just doesn't fit.

And this storyis funny and the summary's got my hopes up, but there are a few mistakes such as when to capitalize a word, where to put a comma or period and where to break a paragraph.

But in overall, I'll continue reading. If the errors become unbearable then I'll have to quit, haha ;)

-LuMezenga

Please update me on the next chapter if there is one and this story is soooo good I love it