I loved that he punched Mr.D. Props, Pollux. Love this. Love it. Love it. Love it. Can you do a one-shot of Pollux hitting Mr. D Please!

Okay this definitely deserves a review. It shocks me no one else has yet. The writing is full of emotion, you've really captured the right tone and mood. The only thing I didn't like is that you said Mr.D didn't care. In the book even Percy notices that Mr.D seemed upset by Castor's death. If you look close enough he cares a whole lot more than he bothers to show especially towards his own kids. Other than that this was great Mr.D, Pollux, and Castor never get enough attention.

naaaaw! I love Pollux!

He is so under-mentioned.

I am also a Twin, and when Castor dided, I was tearing.

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