Nice story. Well done!

I like this.
I like the Intersect being complex, and Chuck being unique in his ability to control it. The show forgot that, but you keep the spirit alive.
I also like fics that can incorporate all the characters, and you write their voices pretty well.
Props to you and to this.

Cute story. Casey's grumbling about not being left out from the intersect party was funny. Would have been funnier if you used his fat kid line there. Would have been funny too if Beckman's video feed got crossed with the Intersect data lines and she got accidentally intersected as well.

I just loved your story! I loved how everyone cooperated to get all the problems with the intersect covered! I loved how Ellie was able to breach Castle! I love how Chuck was now mostly in charge of Castle. I loved how Sarah and Ellie bonded. I really enjoyed your take on the problems with the intersect. Thanks for writing this awesome story!

Somehow I missed this story when you posted. I felt bad for you reading your final author's note, because this story is really plenty fun. I liked all the malfunctioning Intersects, it was actually a more creative approach than what we saw on screen (I'm not trying to be critical of canon on this, some of it is the different strengths of written vs. visual media). I'm still looking forward to seeing Ellie read in to the program, you came up with a satisfying way of doing it serves both her character and the story well.

I'm not sure why this story got so few reviews - it is really quite good. One of the few on here, with its cast of characters and mixture of humour/action/romance, that could be actually be turned into a (two-part) episode of the show.

Just had a chance to get caught up. Nice job! I liked the point you are reiterating with this story-while Chuck is considered the "regular guy", in reality his brain and family background have made him uniquely qualified to be the intersect host. It was a very sweet moment when Sarah told Chuck how proud she was of him, after she got first hand knowledge of what flashing is like. Thanks for sharing this story! I enjoyed it :) And I thought it was great that you incorporated so many of the characters into your story. You are right that they are often ignored.

nice job

I really like how you wrapped everything up and explained everyone but Chuck's inability to use the Intersect in the way the Beckman had dreamed.

I missed a few chapters when they were released, but I'm glad I caught up and could read the whole thing in one sitting.

I really enjoyed a non angsty chapter with faith in the teammembers and no angst! Thanks for writing.

It's kinda nice that in your story Ellie actually gets some answers, including what actually happened to her engagement ring. I like her and Sarah ganging up on Chuck :) I look forward to reading how Sarah and Casey (and Morgan, I think!) deal with their intersects on a mission!

Nice Ellie Sarah interaction over the Morgan interrogation. Smiling all the way through.

nice job. hope next chapter is up soon

Ha, poor Casey. There will be grunting! I really liked that you explored the serious talk between Ellie and Sarah about Chuck.

nice chapter loved the elleie and sarah back and forth and looking forward to the rest of that conversation.