Wow this story was pretty good. Just finished the lost world last week and man was I so mad to see "to be continued". So I started looking for some lost world fanfics.

Reading this one makes me wanna read more aswell it was so good, felt almost like part of the show in a way.

Would you happen to know of any fanfics that attemp to explain what happens after the last ep of season 3?

BORING! Sorry but the story started out ok! but its just to many chapters and its starting to get boring. I just stopped at the end of chapter eleven but not to sound rude or anything but make the story interesting and PLEASE do something about those spelling errors don't you reread your stuff!

very nice and I forgot to review for the last chapter and onr thing in the last chapter you had everything right except it should have been Blake not Roxton.

It was very nice. good I said it now i'm going to read again.

It was a good chapter but when Deanna said I'm the fox it remined me of the Disney Channel show "Zorro" well anyway great chapter and the ready set go thing wasn't lame at all.

I'm getting a little tired of reviewing. Well I'll keep it short you little weasle, It was good so please keep writing!

hey I don't think that was a good trick I mean would you really not make another chapter? Well anyway the first 3 chapters were ok! but please! just keep writting!

This is the third time I have read your story.I love deanna and robert. I have read all of your storys you sould do for now.

star girl

That was a terrific story! *gushes*

One of the best I read! Iread the one about them getting drunk too. That was hilarious.I reviewed on that one too I think.

I stayed up two nights in a roww till past 4am just to read your story, and on school nights too!

You can just imagine how tired I was in school and all I could think about were the funny parts in your fic.

So anywaay,

My favourite chapter was 'Into the Night' because it had the most funny parts with them falling down the slope and Malone doing silly things like disturbing the bat things to prove a point.

My favourite line is She then bending her knees she leaned down and picked something off the bank, she smirked “Malone’s bowl, he’ll be wanting this-“

My favourite character would have to be Deanna but Robert comes second because of the way they keep doing things to each other and to the rest of the crew.

The part that stuck in my mind most was “Ned!” Veronica yelled seeing a man approaching Ned who was lying flat on his back having been knocked down.

Ned looked up seeing the man as he grabbed his collar; he reached back trying to find anything to help himself, he felt something hard and grabbed it bringing it foreword over the large warriors head knocking him out they both fell to the ground.

Malone pushed him off and shook his head trying to get his senses back about him, then he looked and saw what had saved him and took a bit of a double take shaking his head again.

“Where did you get that?” asked Veronica walking over shocked and amused

“I have no idea,” he said stunned turning the bowl over in his hands.

(THE BOWL IS BACK!)

Veronica chuckled shaking her head and then ducked suddenly as a spear came at her from behind.

Another one is

“Where is everyone else?” asked Veronica

“Her highness is still getting ready and I don’t know where Robert and George are?” Roxton said looking around.

“Probably in the lab,” said Deanna an annoyed tone in her voice.

“You have a lab, oh boy-,” said Ned rolling his eyes

Veronica chuckled.

“Yeah tell me about it,” said Deanna “I’ll get them” she said walking out of the room. They followed her.

“Where is the lab anyway?” Roxton asked

“I don’t know I didn’t see it.” Said Ned, Veronica shook her head.

Deanna walked out of the kitchen holding a few glasses to be brought into the dinning room as she passed she turned and stopped next to the stairs and pounded her foot on the floor.

Roxton noticed there was a handle on what looked like a trapdoor in the floor.

Then there was a loud boom like an explosion and they felt the floor shake slightly. Deanna rolled her eyes and opened the trapdoor a crack smoke seeping from it.

“We-we w*cough* will be right up- *cough*” came Roberts shaky voice.

“Uh-huh” she smirked dropping the door.

The explorer’s nodded, typical “Challenger”. Explosions like that were characteristic at the tree house. So where he was concerned this was no real surprise.

I'm not sure about portrating the explorers since the Lost World hasn't been on! *wails, cries, sniffles* But I think you did okay especially with Challenger going scientific and having Ned and Veronica blushing (especially Ned).

I love the way your characters squabble and what they do to each other. It gives some really good ideas for paybacks. *evil glint in eye*

You should definately write more stories on them! Lots and lots and lots more! Your characters make me want them in the show and make me wanna write a story including characters like the. I f I do I hope the people who I mix the various parts of fics in aren't offended! That 's if I ever get round to doing it. If you don't want me to to it then tell me somewhere that I can see!

Make more funny scenes! I love to laugh even though I have to keep it in since I read it late at night. But the best ones are the ones that make me grin or laugh whenever I think about it. And I want much more N/V, M/R/ andd/R and and face pulling as well!

My favourite parts would be the places that made me laugh and there are quite a few of them which is what makes me love the fic so much.

I really hope you write more! I'll always keep alookout for your fics and keep up the odd little quirks. Don't run out of them!

Well, I promised myself that I would not review until I finally got to the end of your everlasting story (I figure you already have 182 reviews, why do you need more?), and here I am! Good Lord, child! What are you trying to make me do? Become addicted to fan fiction? Anyway, great story. I had to come back to read it several times because sometimes I could not get on a certain chapter because "the site was experiencing an overload and would I please come back late?" I had to finish it! I guess that means your story is pretty darn good!

It's about time you updated! In truth I read the last chapter a few weeks ago. I loved this story so much that I printed the whole thing, all 300 pages!Now, onto your questions!

favorite chapters were the ones where they first found Marguerite and when the children went to Deanna's house.

fav line was the one where Deanna was thinking to herself. She thought about how little the explorers know about Marguerite.

fav characters were Deanna and the chief. I don't know why.

part where they had the big water fight, the part where Deanna and Marguerite call each other tiny Tim (lol) and the parts where Marguerite reads that magic book or whatever it was while Deanna fought Haiton.

did portray the explorers correctly.

fav part about Deanna was her personality and her was Ok.

you should. They should visit the explorers again in the tree house this time.

and Robert should get married and Roxton and Marguerite should already be on there second child.(hee hee)

were too many fav parts to this story.

Evil Irish Eyes...Are you really Irish?

EIE! first lemme say. I reviewed this days ago. and i just thought was slow in updating. but now that I've read your review. I went back and noticed it didn't show up. :( here is my review in its entirety (is that a word?)

OMGOSH! It's over! That's it. Finito. Done. The curtain is closed. *sigh* I mean.. it was great and all. but is it really the end? really? is it? Fine.

:) Seriously though. this has been a complete and utter joy to read! I'm usually not into new characters introduced unless they are written in very well. and you. my evil friend. have done quite a job with Deanna and Robert! Impressive. deserves a standing ovation! (really, it does) You're ability to throw them into crazy situations and express it so well in words puts me in awe! :) I LOVE IT! :D

As for your questions.

1. I can't think of one. they were all great! But i think the first one. since it grasped my attention in the first place. :)

2. Lines? Way too many memorable things. I just loved all the cute fluffy moments between M/R, N/V and D/B! hee hee soup. :)

3. Fave character (other than Marguerite) is of course Deanna. The way you wrote her wit, humour and attitude. Not at all like a helpless damsel in distress! She kicked some serious butt! :D

4. ZOMBIES? with the skin and the ickiness. :D

5. You did an absolute great job at portraying Marguerite and Roxton. :)

6. They are so cute together. just like M and R. :) hee hee. the scene where Robert catches her off guard and kisses her. aw. so sweet.

7. Sure! Why not? :D

8. I dunno. a prequel to this fic?

9. Happy endings are always good. no Marguerite dying or stuff like that. :)

Whew. enough questions. :) I'm done with my answering them. :D

As for S4. it's still an ongoing process to make it a reality. But let's be thankful that it isn't completely lost yet. :D Keeping fingers crossed for a season 4! :D

Nuff yapping from the ultimate veggie over here! :) I'll shut up now. Keep on writing! :D *smiles and hugs*

Ow questions hurt brain . First of all it took so long to write this that i cant even remember the other chapters other than they made me keep reading. Deanna is my fav character cuz i dont watch the show cuz i dont like the pther characters (not to mention we are alomost on the same level of being pychotic)Lovely story dear i know you have more and that these nice ppl would appreciate your posting them (personally i dont care ive read them already hehe)but im (as you call me) your beta reader and i do a lot of time on my hands that could be better spent than staring at the wall as i so often do so send them i correct them you know the pattern by now. im not answering the questions because i know you've asked me them enough times in person( but im sure you will ask them again so why waste time typing my response)(plus im sure ppl dont like to read my comments cuz i really cant help being sarcastic to those i know hehe (see im not really mean since i read this despite my not liking the show) your writing is quite good and well your alot more persistant at it than i am so keep on posting cuz we all need something to do with our time and these stories help us ignore more important things we need to be doing thanx :) (by the way it took me so long to read this cuz the site wasnt working for a while and i didnt know about it till a few days ago sry ) buh bye from the elves until we come to criticize your next masterpiece

Yah! Yuo finally finished! here are your answers!

1)first chapter-it got me hooked!

2)“Not your favorite person at the moment?”

3)Deanna- because she was reckless, and stubborn!

4)When Marguerite asved Roxton, because it was so romantic

5)Yes, you portrayed them well

6)I liked Deanna's personality, I liked how Robert was head over heels in love with Deanna

7)Yes, please wrtie more!

8) Anything, maybe another exciting adventure!

9) I liked how they all lived hapily ever after, and the water fight at Deanna's house!

great story, I loved reading it!

I'm so sorry it's over *sobs uncontrollably*

my favorite chapters are 10,11,12,13 and 28 chapters 10-13 are when they first see Marguerite again and I like the exchange between M&R when he falls out from exhaustion and when he wakes up in the blanket with her. also when they talk out on the balcony like in the moonlight. chapter 28 because it completed the story but also that everyone survived and the dancing was funny especially the dip by Robert with Deanna off the ground.

my fav character would have to be Deanna because she was so much like Marguerite. her relationship with Robert was exactly like M&R. Also she doesn't take any stuff from M. but she still was kind and loved M.

like the children and M's relationship

with them especially when they were tickling each other on the bed.

another part I like was when they pushed Challenger in the water.

Yes you portrayed the characters very well. but I like the way M wasn't always so curt with Roxton like in the last chapter when she tells him she thinks the world of him and then some.

Yes you should get these characters together again. the children too!