You are obsessed with Ranma chan?
Me too.

Great and cute.

That's...an interesting twist...and everyone's probably better for it...

Now that I've watched a few episodes of Ah! My goddess. I can now tell what's happening with this anime.

Skuld is Belldandy's sister and is granting Ryoga's wish. Though you never said what license Skuld has! .

It probably would have served to make this fic much more convincing. Anywho... I can tell Skuld's magic abilities are very little. From what I've seen... .

Anywho... she has limited license.

Well, onto the review. Why Skuld? Well... I guess it's because she kinda' looks like a kid and Ryoga wouldn't be tempted to make that wish. Though BellDandy is with you know who and the sister... I don't know about her right now.

One of the things I'd like to address is. Aren't you pushing Ranma's strength a little too far? I mean... you'd have to be a god/goddess to defeat him? That's a nice way to drive Ranma's mary sue powers to the roof. That makes it feel a little... unreal. But who knows... maybe the manga says Ranma is truely a great mary sue image. I prefer to have him have a good rival. Hm... resorting to a wish for someone's death? That I could believe. Though the direction you took it in, well, it's happened before and you seem to know how to handle this without making it look too obvious as to what's gonna' happen.

I really wish this had gone further so I could give it a more proper review.

All I can say is... the writing and editing are very good. The characters seems to know who they are and the storyline seems to add up.

But, thank you for making this crossover which got me curious enough to check out. Ah! My Goddess.

It's still Ranma, thus the wish wasn't granted.

Excellent story! I like it. Ranma-Chan and Ryoga, they make a great couple. Keep up the great work! I hope to see more excellent chapters of this excellent story!

Sincerely,

AshK

another ranma and ryoga story nice

The idea has an interesting basis... that much I can make out. I'm stll vague on the whole, goddess thing, but maybe this lacks a litle development on Ranma's side. It's Ryoga centric, I know. Though I get a feeling that maybe Ranma should have been aware of this as Ryoga made the wish.

Hm I wonder about a few things.

Ryoga made it so that 'Ranma' not recieving a wish and well never born is kind of killing like the Terminators did.

Besides that I can't stand RanmaXRyoga bleargh.

Nice written though.

So Ryoga wishes Ranma were never born and effectively gets rewarded for it? Fascinating. That doesn't leave a terrible taste in my mouth or anything.

...Anyway. Both stories you posted today, while good on their own merits, have lowered my general opinion of Mr. Hibiki a great deal. (Though I'm sure I'll get over it in no time. And I'll most likely read more of either of these stories, as I just enjoy your writing.) One thing, though: if Ranma were due a wish also, why was Ryoga's authorized? That doesn't seem especially fair. Of course, the whole wish-granting element of AMG is kind of fundamentally unfair, isn't it?