I’m wondering if this one was before Crona and Italy then? Due to the vow Soul gives.

Huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhu... Maka Maka...

I love this so much

lolz never thought of maka as a thrill skydiver
though she has the soul for it (lolz so many puns:P)

I've loved this entire series. They are all written so well and your takes on Soul and Maka's relationship is always so well thought through and believable. I know I'd read it if you wrote another collection. Keep writing.

This one is my favorite. I can definitely see how you might have planned on making it longer, but honestly where you stopped was perfect for it. I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing!

YES! I totally pictured Maka knowing how to dance to trance! :D haha. loved it.

So my cousin who doesn't like to read is sitting here reading this and having heart failure because it's so good:D Amazing job!

what kind of writing is this scarlet?

I. Love. this. chapter.

Sorry I didnt review on the other chapters.

So far this is my favorite, still gotta read the others though XD

When I logged back on, I went searching through your stories, because I though this chapter was a whole seperate story.

bleh i think all of them are my fav lets just leave it at that!

yay! another feeder fan! :D you rock even more now!

wow i can feel the intensity of his emotions! great, great job! you should consider becoming an author, neh?

hahaha! awesome! i love it!

darn you always have me changing my mind! this ones my fav now xD

so far my fav