Please update soon! :D

Wow, amazing job. For a chapter that wasn't edited yet it looks pretty good. I'm surprised Rin is still alive in this. I love her reaction wsith Naruto XD

I can't wait to see what role she plays.

I also really liked the scene with Naruto and Sasuke talking about Kabuto and Sakura. You did a great job with keeping character.

Ooh this fic is so interesting! Can't wait to read what happens next. Especially with sasuke and Sakura!

No don't hate this chapter, its so good x)

I liked it. I also didn't think it was that jumpy, I felt that the pacing was right and (to me personally) there weren't really any confusing parts.

I like how Sasuke sort of promised to keep Sakura safe to Naruto, even though he didn't really promise at all. I also love how you incorporate the magic too. It's not like BANG MAGIC! It's there in a subtle way that makes it believable, so I commend you on that.

I liked the length too, a little long but in a good way.

Also I can't wait to see what else happens :D so keep up the good work :)

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Great story. Please update soon.

Haha, seal brown ... I actually googled brown seals to see what kind of colour that would be haha xD it's an interesting hair colour, I might go for it myself :D The team 7-ness was sweeeeeet! I love Naruto! He's so awesome! I always picture Rin as really adorable, and especially talking about Minato, I was just like 'awww' :) I can't wait to see what's gonna happen in the next one! :D

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osm blosom! updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate soooooooooooooooooon!

I liked this chapter a lot. Though Sasuke's brooding attitude is very irritating sometimes. I liked the lighting scene a lot. With Sakura being worried and Naruto holding her back so she doesn't get hurt. Hmmm, since Minato was their captain I wonder if Kakashi knows that Naruto is his son. I mean he is the exact copy of him except his goofy expressions which are like his mother's. :) I hope you can update soon! I am excited for the next chapter! _

Can't wait till the next chapter.

I like this chapter, and it's long too :D But damn it, now you have to update quickly because I reaaaaally want to know what part Rin has in this xD

I kind of wonder how Sakura's mom plays into all of this. I hadn't thought about it before, but that's probably the reason behind her acting strangely about Sakura getting into this school, right? Andyway, Sakura is certainly at a disadvatage when it comes to all these things. You still haven't quite explained anything about the magic in this story. I'm sort of waiting on a technical explanation and background history as to how this all came to be and how their magic works. Hopefully that'll pop up soon?

well it seems like i stmbled into a really good story ! cant wait to see more of it :)

asdfghjkl; this is great.

update soon !

i want to know what happens next~

oooh, :D that was great!

I liked it, the roughness of it and all. It seemed surreal, I liked Orochimaru's introduction into it, and Anko as well (haha Orochimaru is the biggest creep anywhere. I just go ew when I think about it lol)

I'm also glad Ino's more or less out of the coma thing, and that Sakura found out more about her, I feel like even though there might be some sort of fight/ disagreement about what happened in the long run it will make them closer friends

I'm curious to know what Sakura's whole ability is, also excited for more Naruto, Sasuke action (because they make me laugh)

So, good job, can't wait for more :D

haha and sorry it took me so long to read it, I'm lazy lol

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I thought the last two chapters were awesome! It's not often I read a story and picture it so clearly, as if I'm watching it on tv or something. I thought it was really well done, but I admit, I did miss Naruto and Sasuke too. I think we need a lot of humour in the next chapter now xD I'm like that with my own stories. As for the whole Orochimaru thing, I felt so sorry for Ino! I actually felt a little bad for reading about her memories, even though it's not a real person! That's why I love this story so much, and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. Better late than never though :p

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