I love this book!

you know, i followed this story's progress for a while in 2012-ish, and while looking through stuff to read i saw this. i think imma hunker down now that its finished. looking foreward to a good read.

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Really? No reviews in the last seven months? This story deserves more attention!

You did a great job integrating the disparate worlds of Amestris and Equestria. The whole "true story" behind the old Hearth's Warming tale was a stroke of genius! And as usual, Celestia is keeping secrets and pulling strings, but even she gets a lesson. Well done!

Your characterizations are spot-on. Often, OCs are just bland self-inserts or Mary Sues, but you really fleshed yours out and gave them some realistic depth. It's sad that Wind Racer went power-crazy like that, but I guess he just snapped under the pressure of his dad's expectations. I think Douglas Sinclair may be one of my new favorite OCs ever!

Overall, an excellent work, if a little rough around the edges in terms of spelling and grammar. I can ignore a few typos if the story is good enough, and this one definitely was. Keep writing, my friend!

Dude, this was awesome! A wild ride from start to finish, and other than a few spelling errors (Mainly "Fuerer", it's supposed to be "Fuhrer"), I have no problem with this.

Funny thing though, it's a guilty pleasure of mine to go find MLP crossovers despite npt being a fan. This is because MLP crossovers have the potential to be either hilariously bad or absolitely amazing and well thought-out. This fic is most definitely an Amazing one!

While I am MUCH more familiar with the Fullmetal Alchemist characters, I do know what the My Little Pony characters should be like. And you captured perfectly both FMA and MLP characters! (Also I'm glad Celestia pulled her head out of her ass 'cause honestly, it's dumb to assume that all humans are bad. Also ponies have some misinformation about humans it seems, as while a lot of us eat meat, we are not carnivores, but rather omnivores.)

Dark but I loved the ending...

Heheheh! Well, I admit I would like seeing how the initial diplomatic overtures go, and how Armstrong, Mustang and Sinclair's other associates react to his return. But this is a fine place to end it-it's exciting! Luna's last line is like a rocket boomeranging us toward the sunset. Anyway, I'm glad there turned out to be an epilogue. I thought this story ended long ago! Thanks. -)

All in all, a good wrap up. I enjoyed the story far more than I think I should have. It went to some dark places for a pony story.

Yay, final chapter! And it was well worth the wait.

Bravo, good sir, bravo.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit, and thank you profusely for writing it.

HOW MUCH FREAKING LONGER IS THIS EPILOGUE GOING TO TAKE! It's going to be huge isn't it

PLEASE I NEED THE EPILOGUE SO BAD PLEASE I NEED IT!

I'm happy to see this story is still alive.

WHY just when we thought are torture was finally over YOU prolog it with this accursed epilogue WHY DOES IT PLEASE YOU TO WATCH US SUFFER!

This story was one of the ones in the first batch of pony fanfiction I (obsessively) read! And wow, it's finally done! Now Administration Is Magic just needs to wrap up. Congrats on making it come together. This was an ambitious and very unusual project! There were some parts I found very compelling or tender indeed.

I stade with you the entire way looking forward to the epilogue