You are still increasing the pressure With all the stuff you wrote up to now you either have to make the story even larger or have it end in a giant explosion of storylines coming to an end

But apart from that: great work as always ;)

Ooooh you are getting serious

I really liked this chapter (although i despise your cliffies of doom) but i could only read it last night because i couldnt fit the new ep of who in my schedule before (nice of you to scream spoilers, but i think someone who hasnt seen the episode would probably just be _very_ confused )

Well thats just evil, making up another substory and then leaving me hanging by that cliff all on my own :P

ARGH! I hope Finn is not making Sam do anything he doesnt like but rather making him promise to go through with it when he starts going after ben or something like that :/ Also with every chapter you put up you are getting better at evil cliffhangers which is good for you and bad for me :D

That was nicer than Bens time alone, less over the top i think... Well and also i think i know what you are going for... "I remember you, raggedy man, and you are late for my wedding!"

Well that was different I first suspected it would be some "And now Ben is retuerning from this alternat universe"-thingie while the Tardis appears in his classroom but making him stuff himself is also a... viable solution? As long as you dont make him get unbelievably fat im fine with it, as it indicates that at some point he will be getting back to the glee-verse :D

Smart move with the quick "still alive"-chapter. Speaking of still alive: portal 2 rocks :D

Oh and are you planning to have Sam come onto Kurt? that could either get very funny, sexy or spell disaster, you decide :D

Well this was a nice twist, but i am happy to see you did not put this in as finished just yet, that would seem rather rushed ;) are you planning on getting ben back into glee or is this going to be the end of his adventure?

Today is a great day, the english department has free wifi :D

I really hope Kurt can manage to stay strong without the part of the gold guardian helping him get past all the horrible things people did to him :/ oh and good for Ben that he got rid of the Wolf :D And now orders are as follows: go back to writing, as tommorrow im headed home for easter which means i will have constant internet access for a couple of days :P

Urgh...

I Guess every story needs an ass to drive the plot and not be just utter pink fluff, but why do you authors always make Finn a homophobicasshole? I rather like to think of him as a nice goofy doofus :P (whereas _that_ Finn wouldnt fit this fic very well)

Also i like the direction you are taking with Kurt being just a good friend and Sam being able to resist the revulsion of the wolf. (oh and i apologize for my sporadic rreading and reviewing, going to university and not having internet in your home on weekdays does that to you :D)

Just as i suspected: the wolf is fun to read (although i dont think ben enjoys it all too much :D)

Hmm, that wolf thingie is going to get very entertaining isnt it? At least i like where this is going :D

I loved it

Favourite moments include Puck running from Ben an Ben confronting Karofsky :D

BTW i like The Wolf (the song) but i have to admit i only ever got to know it because i love easy a so much :P

Okay, this was different and until about halfway through i had no idea where you were going... I think you (again) managed to create a sub-plot that will probably take one or two chapters on its own to be resolved. If you dont decide to flesh it out or merge it with another arch that is

So again you wrote a gret chapter that confuses on first read and after that fits the story perfectly while still resolving nearly nothing of the tension you are amassing :D

Did i mention that you are a terrible tease? i hate such strong cliff-hangers

Also this chapter some things up but not enough to be considered a solution, is it fair to assume that next chapter will contain the peripety or are you going to push the plot on for some time?

because from the poit you just reached here you could either go for a fast and grandiose ending or fill in more plot and have it develop into some more elaborate plot but that could seem dragged out if you overdo it.

Id say give it all the drama it needs but dont let it end in under 3 chapters, because that would probably seem rushed if compared to the rest of the fic ;)