| Reviews for Sea Foam |
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aoc chapter 1 . 8/10/2014 hmm uni x bobby there should be more stories about those two characters think you could write another one that talks about when bobby first comes into the realm and meets uni? I think it should go like this after the intro the story focuses on the relationship of bobby uni as it first develops leading to uni developing feelings for bobby I'm all for inter species relationships course you can just write a bond/friendship story that would be fine too. |
Meltha chapter 1 . 1/5/2011 Really nice parallel with the Little Mermaid (original version). Poor Uni; there's more than one way not to be able to live in this world. Very well written. |
D.B. Cooper chapter 1 . 12/17/2010 Okay, this is different. What if Uni had made it home with the gang and stayed there? I mean at one point, Eric as DM said that she couldn't survive in our world. After all, there aren't any unicorns in our world. I suppose she could as a human and by magic have been transformed into one when she came here. Are all your stories about alternative D&DC plot lines? |
merlyn2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010 Kind of a pity that this story is marked "Complete", since it left me wanting to know more about what had gone on here, though I can guess at the basics (Uni accompanies the kids home and somehow is transformed into a human). On the other hand, the glimpse that leaves much up to the imagination may be better than more detail. |