It makes Ace look so depressing. Poor guy. But I still loved the poems.

Luvs it girl w

This seems really nice, I like the way Ace ends up in an endless pit of despair with no way out~ (I'm a cruel, cruel, sadist XDDD)

Do you minds if I write a one-shot detailing Ace's personality in this fic? An Ace x Alice with some reflectance to the words in this poem? Please, please, please :33333

But overall, still loved it~ :D

That was eerie and sad, but an apt description of Ace. Great job, keep it up!

Way to perfectly depict the darker side of Ace! This poem, in my opinion, is even better than the first. Keep writing! XD

Wow, that's great! You should be a poet :)

The poem had this really eerie feel to it - that made it all the better :)

Really lightened my day :)

I really liked this poem, described Wonderland perfectly~ :D Good Job! You should write more, maybe a second chapter?

Hmm...interesting, hope to see more from you.

so true~ i shall do it for the children! it might fare you well to make it just a little longer, but you kept it on the subject and i really liked that.