I hate hotch so much right now I do not know why I thought the hate would be mutual and now that its not its really hard to read gah

sorry for not reviewing the first chapter but I love both but I hate how hateful hotch is being I know its for the story but jeez its so mean ha but I like it a lot

You're aware that Hotch is in your fic twice as old as Reid? (in CM he's only 8 years older)

Please update it!
I cant wait, dont leave this beautiful fic!

Please, dont leave it.
I really loved your fic.
Update asap, please!

love it hope you keep it going

That was great.

Interesting story. I am curious where you intend to take this.

He hid the crime scene photos in case it wasn't a person of the team, but who was there was just a boy wearing a large and red blouse with yellow stripes and a very short hair. Hotch didn't know the kid, but the other seemed to be very shy.

Blouse girl's shirt so it be a shirt not a blouse

'but who was' doesn't fit and make the sentence awakard

Very very good Fanfic! I'm a big fan of Hotch/Reid and love reading Fanfics about them. Well done! First heard about you on Fanpop - I'm GublerFlu, by the way (on Fanpop) xx

Elle joined the team AFTER everyone else. she had been in Sex crimes before the bau.

Story great. English a abit awkward.

Awesome story, thank you

Hey Agnes Howlett,

Wow,Great story. It's great to see a story that shows Spencer's friendships with the others at the BAU.I feel that this is as much a Spencer/Hotch Romance, as it is a friends with everyone story. Can't wait to see what happens ,lightnshadows

Not a native English speaker, are you? The wording often does not make sense. The language is stilted and does not flow well. The story idea is very good, but I find it hard to follow what is happening.