I liked your story.
Thank you for writing.
A small criticism:
You need to look up the difference between plurals and possessives.
There, Their, They're are NOT interchangeable, neither are your and you're.
If you work on this little bit...90% of your stories will be much more readable. I hope you understand, I'm not trying to be mean...it's just that those few problems will clear up MOST of your errors.

gg

Excellent stories love them both I hope to see more soon, with Harry and the gang revealing their armor forms to everyone and dumblewhore realizing that his plans r no longer possible ever

Another minor error you might want to change in future adaptations(or if you ever go and continue the Mystic Life Series), Hermione's birthday is to my knowledge in September making her 13 at this point in time.

I really hope the Whomping Willow broke some of Ron's limbs and the reason he wasn't in the Common Room was because he was in the Infirmary for medical attention.

awsome story cant wait and see if you go and go and progess this story more

What happened to the rest of your Mystic series? Still not complete.

Good read. :)

I still like how they're related to Homer Simpson's boss and Batman.

Simpsons? Seriously? Batman is awesome, but the Simpsons?

love stories cant wait for next story of this series

Are you going to still write more of this? I hope you do so...

I think you mean 'Leopard' Gecko, not 'Lizard' Gecko.

Also nice on turning Harry Potter into Peter Pan.

So, Snape is Hermione's Uncle?

That 'Power of the sun' thing make me think of the Solaris Knignt.