I think i may have to give the opposite of my previous advice for this one... or maybe just repeat it in a different context. You have a LOT of descriptive quality here, but you cram it into single sentences so often that it detracts from the story.

I'm afraid teh only way I'll pick this up again after JUST the first chapter is if a total rewrite of the chapter and everything from here on were to occur.

4/10 for this one... sorry.

I really liked this story, had to do some research to understand totally spies, but, I did, hope you will be writing more DMC crossovers or regular DMC fics.

Yo, man, this is an awesome story, you just need a beta reader!

Awsome chapter and ending very well written. I like the final battle against Mundas and the fact that both Alex and Clover are going to be demon hunters as well as spies not to mention the part about them running Dante's old shop Devil May Cry was the greastest part of the chapter as well with the battles. If you are interested in doing another i put up take a look at my Totally Spies Green Lantern challenge and tell me what you think of it and if it would be something you would be interested to write a story about. Thanks for writing the best story on the website and best of luck to you and any stories in the future. Peace out from your fellow author and biggest fan Yugioh5d

another very awesome and well written chapter yet again. I really like the way Mary,Clover, and Britany team up against the remaining demons. I also really like how you end each and every chapter with a cliffhanger more writers should follow your example as your the best author i have seen on the website even better then me. I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next including the final battle against the main bad guy. Please update soon so i can read the next chapter in this very awesome and epic story. Good luck with this story and any future ones you write.

A very awesome and epic chapter. The battle between Alex and Vergil with both of them using their Devil Triggers was epic my friend. I like the appearance of Dante near of the chapter and that Alex is decided to keep her new appearance and powers for good as she looks better with it then she was before. I think you should have Alex use Vergil's sword Yamto since her so called brother is now dead. Please update soon and keep up the good work with this story and any others you write and i can hardly wait until the final baatle.

Very well done another awesome chapter written. This story so far as me on the edge of my seat. I feel like i am actually playing a Devil May Cry game. I like how you had Clover and Mary kiss as well as Trish and Alex. I can hardly wait until the fight Vergil comes up. I think you should have both Vergil and Alex activate their Devil Tiggers. Please update soon and good luck with the rest of this story and any others you write in the future.

Another awesome chapter written yet again. I like how you gave Alex Nero's Devil Bringer and his weapons and the appearance of her devil tigger along with her new cloths as well the interaction between Clover and Mary. This has got to be the best chapter i have read so far and i can hardly wait until Clover and Mary kiss for thr first time. Please update soon and good luck with the rest of this very awesome story as i will keep reading it.

Another awesome chapter done yet again. I really like the fight between the spies and Cerberus as well as the accidental kiss between Trish and Alex and how it happen along with Alex's first devil arm. Please update real soon so i can find out what happens next to the team. Thanks

Another Awesome chapter very well done. I like the reaction that Alex's mom had to her daugther new appearance and the fight between the two of them. I can hardly wait for the next chapter and the interaction between Trish and Alex and the appearance of Alex's devil tigger. I hope that Alex ends up with Nero's weapons the Red Queen Sword and the Blue Rose gun. As for devil arms for Alex how about giving her Cerberus,Artemis, and the sword Alastor to start with as well as maybe giving Alex a arm simlier to Nero's Devil Bringer to spice things up. Keep up the good work and update soon as i can hardly wait to see some romance between Trsih and Alex.

Another awesome chapter done. I really like how you made Trish and Mary appeared in the story and Trish's reaction to learning that Alex was Dante i suggest you give Alex Nero's weapons the Red Queen sword and the Blue Rose gun as well as his Devil Bringer arm as well as a few Devil Arms that she could use against the demon's she will be facing. Do you plan on having the pies mothers appear in the story later on as i would love to see Caremn's reaction to her daughter new appearance and maybe you could pair Trish and Alex with other since Alex is Dante's reborn self. Thanks for taking the time read my review and hope you update real soon so i can read what happens in the next chapter

Awesome story so far. I really like how you wrote the story so far as it reads like a version of the Devil May Cry video game series. May i suggest that you have both Lady and Trish make a appearance in the story as that would be very good to read about and maybe you should have Alex keep her new look as she looks like a better with it then her old self. Hope you update real soon so i can see how things turn out for Alex and the rest of the spies