loved the story but the ending felt rushed and a bit sloppy

What was the spinning out of control part? Where they caught in a microburst? Pilots are actually trained to get out of a microburst and there are computers now that can detect them in a thunder cell.

100th review! I'm so glad I read this story. This story wasn't that 'cliche' ending where she's the same age as him and how everything would be so not practical. This faced maturity and reality.

Im glad I read this. This was beyond awesomeness . Totally loved it. You moved me so much.

Thank you.

ahaa! I was thinking that as I was reading it! (the Laputa thingy-mabob) anyways, this is a fantastic story so far and I can't wait until sophie wakes up! xx

lovely story 3

Oh my gosh that was so good! Your OC was really realistic and it was very well written! Although I cried when Sophia died, I loved the ending and how Fred and Sophia got back together ;)

It's probably one of the best HP fanfiction I've ever read, seriously;) You had a lot of great ideas - I mean - normally when I'm reading the first chapter I rather know what will happen next, but in your ff there were loads of unexpected events. And I can't forget about the end - it was incredible;) and I do think 13 years is an acceptable gap. Kisses;*

Ohhh so cute I love how they don't care about the age gap

Omg that is sooo sad...

Omg this story is getting so excting!

i am loving this story! i dont want fred to die in the end! i want sophia to be able to stop it... ahhhh! sooo cute btw. Does sophia and Leon want to get bak home at all?

wow a very gripping first chappie! well done!

Loved the story. Just bloody amazing!

This story was totally awesome, and I love it though it made me cry.

And I really hope that you are gonna write more OC romances from Harry Potter :D

Aw, what a cute ending. I couldn't have pictured it better myself. :) *Tearing up*