| Reviews for Don't You See I've Been Here all Along? |
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The Trupe chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Just love it |
hartsbreak chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 Amazing Atory, one 9f the best I've read |
romionexo chapter 1 . 9/24/2012 sweet :) minor thing - snape would probably call Hermione Miss Granger :) |
F Maurice chapter 1 . 7/17/2011 Aaahhhhhh. This is so sweet. I have only one suggestion. I saw a few punctuation errors and misspelled words, so remember to use spell check. |
the-fierceness-of-a-storm chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 I like how you included some actual lines form the movie. That kept it together and made it clear that it wasn't going to be entirely crazy or anything. I also appreciate that you kept the same style through the whole thing. One thing, though. I'm not really sure about how you portrayed Harry and Ginny. If you were going to edit it, I would suggest not necessarily using a different point of view, but making their relationship a little more realistic. Very nice, I enjoyed reading it. |
pyr0technic chapter 1 . 1/27/2011 Sweet |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 1 . 12/23/2010 This is so incredible! I love it! The details are fantastic and you describe their emotions so well! Well done! :D |
Orcatje chapter 1 . 12/19/2010 A bit hard to follow sometimes but very sweet and nice story;) Have been looking for one on the poisoning quite a while, found this one, and am more than satisfied:D Great job(Y) |
hollyweasleyxx chapter 1 . 12/15/2010 LOVED this story ! it was so adorable :) MHW |
PotterLovesEvans chapter 1 . 12/14/2010 So cute! Loved it! U should write more RHr. You're great at it! |
mclaughlin chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 A wonderful one-shot of a sometimes over-used story line. I have always found the scene in the hospital wing between Lavender and Hermione amusing. Especially the line from Hermione "He's been poisoned you daft dimbo!" Hahahaha. I have wondered if perhaps Emma couldn't say the line properly "He's been poisoned you daft bimbo!" and they ended up with her saying "He's been poisoned you daft dimbo!" Any way Well Done. |
sammyalex-in-the-snogbox chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 So I'm pretty sure that was actually the cutest thing I've ever read! 3 |
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 i like this, showing how much ron and hermoine care about each other. |