this is so beautiful! I think you really have captured Ariana, she was not a child but not a adult in life so I think this is how she would be when she was dead

Wow, this was beautiful. I'm writing my own SiriusAriana (Siriana?), which is really inspired by this and the other Siriana (OK, I'm calling them that now) story on this site, by Haylis. Thanks for this, it was amazing :)

This story is beautiful! The boy whom they found is the young-looking Dumbledore, right? "He feels as though this boy can look into his soul" It's so Dumbledore XD

I read this long ago (At least I think it was long ago, the pulish date for this doesn't really fit with my idea of how long it was since then) and I loved it. So much I am currently writing a little story of my owm with Sirius and Ariana. But seriously, LOVED, LOVE and HAS TO LOVE it :D

Ooooh:) I love the concept of this story. I never would have thought of something like this, but it's wonderful. Thanks for a fantastic fic:DD

~Rae

wow. just wow

Okay I know that it is really strange for me to be so inspired by this, but I am. No I will not at all copy your idea, I had already been thinking about doing a Sirius/Ariana before I clicked on the link, but you have definitely given me things to think about. I really like what you did with this. Something so short shouldn't be allowed to be this amazing, but it is, and I adore it, you have opened up my mind.

~Wish My Name Was Elizabeth~

I liked the story it is well written. I am a little confused at who the boy is at the end of the story, I thought it might be Aberforth but I think he has auburn hair. Anyway it was well written, and who would have ever thought of Sirius and Ariana as a couple, but it strangely makes sense.