i think i would have liked this better if you had kept it at one of their stories, like abby's i would have really liked to see the out come to her story. watch her fall for him and the mistakes she makes and the mistakes he does and the things he tries to do to get her love

this is really good, very good detail

i see you like twins...I LOVE TWINS!

i have been looking for a story i can read and it doesnt seam stupid...this one takes the cake :) deffintaly reading this one!

I love these stories.

Love this! You are such a wondeful writer, I all but forget Im sitting somewhere reading this im so tuned in to everything playing out before my eyes. (well my mind I should day.) Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.

I loved this story. Please keep writing, I'll be here.
Happy Holidays.
R.

Sweet. Would work as a one shot though.

Haha, what are the after-affects of drinking monkey blood?

Awesome story. I plan on reading the next one soon. Abs and sammy were my the beggining. I wish the whole story coulda been in her pov. And now i wish the next story woulda been in her 16 yr old daughters pov lol but it was still the bomb. Keep writing my friend, keep writing!

and we meet again entirely unique... I can't believe I managed to find it again, I was stupid and didn't have an account when I started reading so it has took me months to find it and now I don't remember what chapter I was up to :(

Sorry but I just had to guess... From what you said at the end, I would have to guess Jesse has a talent similar to Jasper's.

I loved it! Purely wonderful! I'm sorry I didn't review each chapter. I read straight through in a day and half! I was wondering if you decided to make a sequel or not?

Good story. Had me hooked all through. Well done.

This has been one heck of a story, and I hope that you continue the story of your very unique characters. Please keep writing in this universe. I very much enjoy it.

Thank you for a wonderful read, and a great experience.