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I am making so many noises over this chapter. When I saw you updated the other day I was like oh my god it's that fic! I finally got around to reading this chapter today (in fact I reread the whole thing from the beginning again) and god your characterization is still my fav thing. And I wasn't expecting that kiss at the end! Aaaaa so happy. God I just love everything you say in this fic and how everything is like indirect. If there is ever a good example of "show don't tell writing" this is it.

I could pick apart this all day with all the things I like. From reborn being reborn without even having a word of dialogue in this chapter, to the beautiful tension between gokudera and tsuna. I love how you get into their heada! And you know I didn't even realize it myself that tsuna wasn't saying gokudera-kun anymore until you pointed it out!

Seriously hope you continue to write for this. It's soooo good. Definitely one of my favorite fics.

This is really great! You write well and I haven't read a fic about this before. Witch is kinda weird considering the stark contrast Tsuna and Gokudera have in their attitudes towards mafia. I'm looking forward to more :)

This..you...

wow

genius!

please continue this! im like amazed no one else has written anything like this before! and i love how you perfectly have the characters IC. so much love for this. hope you update it!

It made me realized a lot of things!

Pls write more! I want more! I need more! I want those two to be together more! They need more too~! DX

Cliff. Hanger. ):

But I love the writing and the characters in general, so I guess I'm okay with it.

This is quite the story! Somehow, I could see this happening on the show... I'm interested to see how you pull out the side of Gokudera that is not completely oblivious. Nicely done.

I think I like this side of Tsuna, since every other fic usually portrays him as the perpetual nice guy. It makes him more 3 dimensional, kinda. The writing is pretty good too.

Oh my, how refreshing~~!

Your story is just so fresh and original, and I feel so enthusiastic about being able to read the next installment!

The characters so far act so accordingly, and the added ones are so interesting.

I really do look forward to your next update!

Sincerely,

Ayu

Although it takes me ages to fully understand and work with my confusion, i still think this is a good fic, and an interesting one. I demand continuation asap. :)

This is just so interesting! I'm dying to know what happens next. I really like how you're having Tsuna not like accepting the inheritance because it seems more real to him, and as sad as it is at the moment, I do like how you have him angry at Gokudera not being able to see that he doesn't want it. I can't wait for more!