One of my favourite reading your stories,hope you are ok,it has been such a long time since you posted any stories and I miss them.

Wow! I loved this so much! Thank you! This goes on my favorites list, and I assure you , I am very picky about what gets added! God bless you!

Good job, ladies! Terrific suspense and pacing. Great story.

Good story. Enjoyed it very much.

Great job nailing early Tony's playful yet efficient deminor. Nicely written and great portrayal of the characters we love and why we love them.

This was a brilliant story worthy of any NCIS episode aired on TV. You got the main characters in your story so like the actors in the TV series Well Done

Great story!

Thanks for posting this.
You two have talent ;)
I loved the Gibbs/Tony relationship and Gibbs' reaction to Tony's "death"
There should be more ffs about the time when Gibbs and Tony were alone
and could only relay on each other
I also liked Fornell in this story
It showed another side of him
Greets from Germany
Sandra

Got me hooked! Waiting not-so-patiently for more to come .. pretty please.

Excellent read great story telling...loved the take on Gibbs' and DiNozzo's early relationship and the bond that developed...not to mention the action and drama.

I enjoyed this story very, very much. Very suspenseful with just enough sharing of emotions between Gibbs and Tony to avoid being too sappy. Loved Tony's dialogue - always humor in the face of danger. You two are great writers individually and together. I admire your ability to put together believable plots. That's my biggest challenge in trying to write crime dramas. Anyway, I am looking forward to your next collaboration as well as individual stories.

great story and case

Ok, just wanted to let people know that Laine3112 has given me the name of the story i was looking for. Big shout out to her, and go read her stories! oh wait you are reading one of her stories! :) well co-written stories anyway :)

Hey, I'm looking for a story that I read a couple of months ago, but I can't remember what its called. basically what happens is Director Morrow forced Gibbs to hire Tony 7 years ago, but Gibbs never told Tony. And then something happens(i forget what) and Tony is taken into FBI custody(i think) and they have to tell him Gibbs was forced to hire him. I forget what else happens, but i know Tony escapes from the FBI and it has something to do with his father. That's all I remember but if any of you know what it's called, i would greatly appreciate if you would let me know.

thank you for this wonderfull story it was beautiful