So this is really for the last chapter a si already reviewed it. I hope you reconsider and give a sequeal or just a couple more chapters to save Naruto. It has been some time so what you think is childish would be improved although personally I think its brilliant. I spent a whole day looking for this story. Please reconsider and rescue naruto!

Please write a sequel. Like :( I wanna know what happens... Dont leave it off like that.

it's a shame you never finished this completely. it was well written and kept me intrigued. I hope one day you decide to write more on this.

You really should do some research when you make a story, like the phoenix thing? Do you know in East, phoenix symbolizes women of power. An empress or queen. But always, always beneath the emperor or king, which is the dragon.

While im trying to enjoy the plot, I wonder why you describe Sasukes household like that. They are very rich, shouldnt they have butlers and maids. Mr and Mrs Uchiha are business tycoons, they have time to cook? Lolz. Do you even know how huge corporate world works and how very rich people manages their lives? And Sasuke having no car whatsoever, when he's 17yrs old? At a very least, with all the kidnapping attempts, he should have his own set of bodyguards. I belive even if the setting is not in Asia, utterly weatlhy people who goes to HS given that they prefer it vs home schooling, and if they came from old money, Sasuke and Itachi should have their own driver to fetch them whenever. This makes the story a little hard to read. Writing a story needs research too not only pure imagination. Logic needs to be incorporated even with fanfiction.

That was such a good story! Oh my god the ending though... I was expecting a happy ending with finality! I mean I can guess that nobody gives up and Naruto is eventually found but after all the heartbreak and everything Naruto went through to be alone with that horrible creature again... truly devastating. I won't say this is the best SasuNaru I've ever read, but it certainly comes close. Thanks for a great read.

Best wishes and off to check out some of your other stories,
Naruto Meowzers

I love the story! I hope you find time to continue this pretty please This is one of the best well written fanfics out here and you got me hooked.

NO HOW CAN YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT I NEED TO KNOW IF NARUTO IS OK

Oh dear... why do I get the feeling that Sasuke attempting to seduce Naruto isn't going to end well...

I'm still mad at you... it's almost 1 am I should probably go to sleep...but I want to keep reading !

I am very angry at you right now!

Noooooo! HOW DARE YOU!?

Noooooo

I'm guessing that Orochimaru raped Naruto... :(

Poor Sasuke.