| Reviews for The First Legion Series Book 2: The Argonauts |
|---|
  HeyItzMeh chapter 6 . 10/7/2017 Good plot line and characters, I like how you took some inspiration from rick, but also made them your own characters. Some constructive criticism: I feel like the major events are right after another after another. I wish "down time" for the characters was created, where they could have conversations so that the reader could understand more about then. Still a great story though! |
 simon.heinrich.982 chapter 17 . 7/18/2013 This is really good! Continue it fast! |
| Tigersbite09 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013 Awwww! seeing Leo so happy with hazel makes me all warm and gooey inside:3 I love a happy Leo:) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/25/2013 jason is not this good he's a percy wannabe |
| V chapter 10 . 10/8/2012 Hylla |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/13/2012 Can mortals go on quests |
| cool guy chapter 17 . 7/21/2012 awesome what will happen next cant wait |
| Huinari chapter 17 . 7/13/2012 Dang... out of time, I'll have to read the sequel tomorrow... Wow, now THAT'S what I call a cliff-hanger! Awesome story. But you probably knew that. |
| Pikachu087 chapter 9 . 7/13/2012 LOL |
| Pikachu087 chapter 5 . 7/13/2012 HAHAHSHAHAHAHAHA I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING |
| Pikachu087 chapter 3 . 7/13/2012 wow! |
| PJ chapter 15 . 6/17/2012 Catholics suck anyway |
| Nothing importantjere chapter 9 . 11/16/2011 awesome just awesome "come up with a diplomatic soluction for THIS Leo and i'll send you virtual cookies |
| bookwyrm.the chapter 7 . 10/18/2011 Good job making the prophecy rhyme! And also making it morbid, like all good prophecies must be! |
| obsessedwithPJO.really chapter 17 . 8/9/2011 you're rick riordan's friggin doppelganger |
