Please update

i forgot about this entirely. Davis being jealous os kari and nd t.k liking davis and Kari going to know that t.k likes davis? i can't wait for that to play out.

I really like this 3

I can't wait to see how Kari takes T.K's news. Davis probably won't know what hit him when he finds out that T.K. isn't interested in being Kari's boyfriend, Davis's reaction oughtta be a good one. Waiting and wondering for what's in chapter three.

Hi!

I'm glad you updated, this chapter is very great!

So Takeru is interested in Daisuke already, huh? That's good

Update soon plz !

Really liked this chapter! I can't wait to read more! :D But anyway, here's my balanced review!

The good:

-Use of comedy, keeps the story and Takeru's wake-up scene from being flatly written!

-Takeru's inner-monologues are interesting, and thankfully in character.

-You set up the Daikeru! And kept it with the continuity to boot! Your attention to detail is greatly appreciated!

-You brought Hikari into the story! Wise choice not addressing how she'll take Takeru's sexuality yet. It gives you time to think out how to write her reaction and whether she'll be supportive or repulsed.

-Keeping Taishiro as the experienced, supportive Beta couple to the story. :D

The bad:

-Sorry. I don't advise changing the names you've used in the story, now, but I personally prefer the japanese names. I won't criticize your choices as an author. It's your story and your right to make those choices. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. :)

awww poor tk! matt is so mean! update soon, please!

very good, keep writing, wanna know what happens next

bye

Hi!

Very great chapter! I want you to continue :D

The pairings are Davis x TK and Tai x Matt, or Davis x TK and Tai x Izzy?

Update soon, please !

Bye

I'll try to give you a fair review! :D

The good:

Wada Kouji reference! Sadly I'll probably be one of the only people to notice this. XD

Koushiro's been reasonably altered by Taichi's influence

Yamato's rejected his own sexuality and projectively rejected Takeru, not only making for an intelligent plot point but a good storyline of family drama

The bad:

WANT THE CHAPTER TO BE LONGER SO I CAN READ MORE OF YOUR STORY! XD

I'll review as the chapters come! Keep writing! You have talent here! And thanks for the dedication.