Oh I love it.

Okay this was great.

I dont usually dig into simple lemons aka a lemon for lemon's sake but this was anything but. You managed to keep it tasteful and beautiful and every other good compliment that comes into your creative mind. I only read it because it was Narusaku and you, sir, you were able to meet the high standards of literary excellence I expect of my favorite couple.

Only thing left to say is keep sharing such wonderful stories.

Hope you enjoy writing them as much as I enjoy reading them.

Loved it keep up the great work man.

Oh and a quick question are you a NaruSaku fan? Also what other pairings do you like?

-HybridTailedFox, Hybrid, Fox, Kyuubi

...yeah.. this is shit.

The actual content presentation is on the upper level but the content itself is sadly lacking in depth in a big way.

Maybe some of your other stuff is better. This was porn without plot

That was so effing cute! And believable. And well written. And awesome. Just awesome.

Nice story, very romantic, keep it up

Very nice. I loved the fact that this was a lemon with a plausible plot. And bonus points for being well written. A coherent sentence is sometimes hard to find in the lemon world. Great job!

sexy, cute and funny loved it :)

nice lemon with a plot only thing i can think of is a little more sakura cares about naruto in the start so its not so left field at the end not bad enjoyed thanks again for the read )

hey man that was awesome! i dont think ive seen any others from you? if you finish another narusaku story...think you can let me know? other than that the story was awesome. i cant wait to read more from you

Very nice story and the ending was great all in all it was one of the most romantic one-shots I've read and I cant wait for more

i like it (hey i can post in my account again.. yay lol)

can be interesting if had more chapter but i think is right right now..., is very good and wow, suprise suprise :D

Omgomgomgomgomg! Awesome! :D Luv it!

I really want to see more of your stories!

That story was really cute and believable! Nice work! :)

It seems realistic. And I can imagine it perfectly. Good work and keep it up. I'm subscribing to you so I can see more of your awesome work :D