No fair(pout)

Actually, Sam named her flour sack 'Lilith'.

Awww cute ending I really enjoyed this story! Good work :)

Just gotta say I found this today and love it so far :) good job on it! Onto the next chapter . . .

Hmm, yes.

"All is as it should be." -Clockwork

HURRAY! Thank You SOoo MUCH! IT was AWESOME!

YYYYYEEEEEAAAAA! YOUR WELCOME D

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Awww that was such a wonderful ending. And Danny got his kids back! Good job! *Applauds*

HURRAY! Thank yuz sooooo much! (sorry to hav pestered u) I would have reviewed a lot sooner but um...it is a long story. Anyway it's great and I really enjoyed it!

please update sooner than it can be

Er... reading that last comment you made there, I REALLY hope you're not planning on having Danny dump his wife in favor of Sam. Sure, I don't really like DannyxOC, but that would just be cruel, not to mention the fact that they have two kids who aren't even 5. That'd be a bit traumatizing for a kid to grow up knowing that their parents split because their dad liked another woman better :(

So, yeah, I like this story, it's very original and well executed, but I plan to stop reading if you do plan on having Danny dump the OC.

yes! new chapter! yaaayy!

I love Dash and Qwan. It's fun to see how all there old school mates have changed, or stayed the same, over 10 years. I still feel bad for Lilith, and what happened to her little bro? I know he survived, but where is he now? Please continue writing I LOVE your story! (:

OMG cant wait for the next chapter to come out! i love his story!

keep up the great work! i cant wait to see more! update soon!