Wonderful story, very in character so far! I cannot wait for an update. :)

...LOOOOOOOOOOOOVING IT! Idk what others may think but these seem so in-character, if not, its strikingly similar. Cant wait to see what else is in store :D

Ill be waiting (;

Wah, I just can't wait for the next chapter! You're really great! :D

I love this! It flows very smoothly, Ciel and Sebastian are in character, and I'm far too interested to know what's going to happen next. :D

oh man, I can just imagine what'll happen next, dearest me xD

I love this!

Hello. Seeing that you reviewed one of my stories, I thought it would be proper manners to review one of yours. Luckily for me you wrote a fic for one of my favorite anime series.

Nicely written, though I can't wait for the juicy parts. They shall show your true talents. ;D

Keep it up. Good luck.

AHAHAHAHA Ciel is so ornery! ahh its 3am and im extremly tired for the lame review! pretty cool story so far though :)

Please make another chapter, I love this so much!:)

THIS WAS AWESOME! I really hope we have another chapter up soon, I loved loved LOVED this! I am also looking forward to reading about the upcoming social events. Those types of things are usually very interesting and entertaining. :)

Wow! What a great story! I love it!

I have personally decide the career path you should take: author. You need to write stories for a living. I am in awe of your innate ability to paint vivid pictures with mere words.

On the contrary, I found this chapter to be very interesting indeed, because you gave the readers your view on Ciel's personality which greatly varies from author to author.

Quick question if I may, will there be smexiness? I will total continue to read your wonderful story with or without lemons because of the super plot-line you have going on. But I kinda don't want to get my hopes up for awesome smex if there won't be any. Anyway happy new year and merry writing.

Brilliant chapter, and the detail in it was a pleasant surprise.

I don't really think you need a beta reader, persay. I sort of skimmed for issues while I was reading, and as far as I'm concerned, your grammar and spelling are very good; all I really noticed were slight issues that only Grammar Nazis like myself would pay attention to. If you still want someone to look over your work, I would be glad to, but as I said . . . for you, it isn't really necessary.

I love the idea of Soma learning how to cook from Bard, because . . . well, it would end horribly in disaster, wouldn't it? XD

As I said, it was a wonderful chapter, and I hope you'll update soon. :)

~Shadow

I love it especially how you detailed good job! wish it was a little longer though but its still good keep it up W xD

~rating of 1-10 for this chapter ummm a 8~

~BBM

*looking forward to reading more chappies chow!*

laalaaalaaaaaaaaaaaa!

AWESOME~! UPDATE SOON~!