| Reviews for Laid Low |
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KillgarraghForever chapter 1 . 6/14 You can't leave it like that! What's that nasty plastic stuff mutating into? |
charmedfan120 chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Great story |
rish38 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 HA HA! AWESOME FANFIC |
Lis 14 chapter 1 . 8/13/2017 Please write a sequel. After that last line, I really want to ream more. |
PurpleNightwing chapter 1 . 4/4/2017 What does that last sentice mean is there gonna be a sequal |
0Tenshi-no-Tsubasa0 chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 Everytime I read this, I always want more! Or at least write more Alan whump! You are good at it! |
gima2618 chapter 1 . 12/9/2016 O.o oh dear |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2016 Your writing is TO DIE FOR. |
TEHUFLSBGEGR chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 Yay! This was AWESOME! Are you going to do a sequel? That last line makes it seem so... Antwho, This was Epic! :{) |
killer4853 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 love the story |
TBMom chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 Enjoyed your story. Well done! |
Mickiecuteknight chapter 1 . 10/11/2011 Loved the story. Wish there was more. |
geeklover89 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011 Awesome story, I like the details. Is this meant to be a multichapter story cause it is set up that way and I would love to see if something else happens to Alan. |
Iniysa chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 OH! You so made that ending a cliffhanger! Awesome story! Hope you write more. :P Oh and: "Shut up, Buck. Tell your commander that General Travis is calling in a marker." And how would Travis know who the commander is to call in a marker? :) I know you said it was a story for another day, but a lot of outsiders sure do know one very huge secret. LOL! Oh well, the Tracy's can't do it all I suppose. :) Lauren |
cathrl chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 I enjoyed this a lot! Poor old Alan, never _that_ sick when all around him appeared to be hurt worse, and just gradually feeling more and more miserable... Very plausible, and I loved that the gun was on the table right at the very start...though I didn't see it until I went back and looked. |