Reviews for Laid Low
KillgarraghForever chapter 1 . 6/14
You can't leave it like that! What's that nasty plastic stuff mutating into?
charmedfan120 chapter 1 . 2/1/2018
Great story
rish38 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018
HA HA! AWESOME FANFIC
Lis 14 chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
Please write a sequel. After that last line, I really want to ream more.
PurpleNightwing chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
What does that last sentice mean is there gonna be a sequal
0Tenshi-no-Tsubasa0 chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
Everytime I read this, I always want more! Or at least write more Alan whump! You are good at it!
gima2618 chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
O.o oh dear
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Your writing is TO DIE FOR.
TEHUFLSBGEGR chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Yay! This was AWESOME! Are you going to do a sequel? That last line makes it seem so... Antwho, This was Epic! :{)
killer4853 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
love the story
TBMom chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Enjoyed your story. Well done!
Mickiecuteknight chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Loved the story. Wish there was more.
geeklover89 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Awesome story, I like the details. Is this meant to be a multichapter story cause it is set up that way and I would love to see if something else happens to Alan.
Iniysa chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
OH! You so made that ending a cliffhanger! Awesome story! Hope you write more. :P Oh and:

"Shut up, Buck. Tell your commander that General Travis is calling in a marker."

And how would Travis know who the commander is to call in a marker? :) I know you said it was a story for another day, but a lot of outsiders sure do know one very huge secret. LOL! Oh well, the Tracy's can't do it all I suppose. :)

Lauren
cathrl chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I enjoyed this a lot! Poor old Alan, never _that_ sick when all around him appeared to be hurt worse, and just gradually feeling more and more miserable...

Very plausible, and I loved that the gun was on the table right at the very start...though I didn't see it until I went back and looked.
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