this was such a good story

"Oi, Arthur. Don't make me reach over and give you what for."
"Oh, me 'ol jam tart is quakin' in fear," I said, holding up my hands in mock terror."

this part KILLED ME XD
years later when im more or less out of the fandom and I still love coming back to read this fic 3

I love it~!

OMG LOV THIS STORY, MY FAVORITE

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Hmm I did love the character development, but I couldn't help feeling like Arthur was being too pushy and not respecting Alfred's bounds. He also constantly came off as full of himself and that bothered me. Perhaps his problem is a selfishness that makes him unable to understand why people don't want to talk about things sometimes.

England is a funny drunk. "Am I Catholic or Protestant? "

OMG FIRST PRINCESS AND THE FROG AND NOW ENCHANTED! I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THE DISNEY SONG REFERENCES!

I loved the Princess and the Frog reference :)

Goddamnit please give me a warning like Usuk or Ukus next time (there is a difference). Great drama tho!:)

Ahaha they started singing the song from Enchanted that's gold. That was probably the best part I swear

OMFG! THEY WORKED IT OUT AND *spoilers* THEYRE GONNA GET MARRIED! OH THE HOMO MAKES MY HEART MELT, MY VOICE SQUAK, AND MY HANDS FLAIL! seriously though, good job. I kind of hate and love when authors are writing a usuk story and put revolutionary references in. like I understand that it was a super big thing in their relationship but like seriously it causes so many feels! They almost always break up and fight and it's so sad but then getting back together is nice! Anyways, nice job and continue writing!

Oh dear Lord Jesus have mercy. I'm not done but I just finished chapter 18. I'm crying. So stupidly crying. The feels are like wow. Just wow. I really hope it gets better (relationship wise, writing wise its already pretty damn good) and they work out their problems. I like how you made it so when alfred is upset he gets violent or sexual. It's a nice way for him to still have anger issues but to not abuse Arthur. The Disney song part had me giggling all throughout at the dorkiness. All I could see was Arthur in that dress made from curtains singing while a confused Alfred stands around in a suit. Well done and continue writing!

OHHH FUCK! ENDINGS LIKE THAT ALWAYS HAVE ME GIDDY! AAAHHHAHAHA! GOOSEBUMPS! FANGIRLING LIKE MAD! 3

WTF AL?! HITTING YOUR BELOVED?! REALLY?! Lord I hope this ends happy...