Break my heart with smut! I like how your writing of Jade was subtle so I was right there with Tori trying to figure out what's happening in her head. The intensity that feels normal for Tori was great, and the struggle to understand the tenderness too. Again, all so tangible!

I wished they will both have their turns in the pool

Both had judged the books by the cover and are both learning new things. And both are learning about each other. Jade changing the rules was clearly for the best, even if she hadn't planned on it.

Tori and Jade, what have you gotten yourselves into? No one can play this kind of game for very long before something changes. Good chapter and I enjoyed reading it. onto the next chapter

Interesting start, Jade tossing the rules that she made herself. Wonder if she even knows why she did. As for you Tori, I personally suggest that you adjust fast to this new game. It'll be a learning experience

I figure you may not be around anymore as your last update was to "Streetlights," some two odd years ago. However I would feel remiss if I did not say that is is still my favorite story on . This was the first story I ever read on this website all those years go, it opened a door to a world of new and growing literature. I apologize if I may be rambling or have gone on too long, I simply want to sayThank you." I wish you all the best and hope life treats you well.

I love this fic so much it’s definitely my favourite for this pairing:)

I love this story and I hope that maybe sometime in the future we could get a follow up on this story

just read this fic and thought it was fucking brilliant.

Beautifully done as always.

fuck im dead this is so good and i'm so! fucking! emotional! i tried to hit u up on tumblr with some Nice Anon Asks but it seems ur not on weirdprince anymore but i jus want to say tha i'm such a slut for ur fics like dude what the fuck just murder me this is so good 11/10 i support this and i support u and i miss jori so much

i! miss! jori! and i miss ur jori fic and anyway i'm dead

My God, this isn't even the first time I've read this. That was like a year ago... And I've been reading it ever since. By far my favorite story; not only is it beautifully written, it is also an interesting story. Thanks, even though I'm late to the party (again God damn it).
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im on the jori spree rn like fuck me up i am finding the good shit and holy fuck man i am back into the feels train and I KNOW THIS IS PROBABLY GONNA FUCK ME UP BUT I AM READY FOR IT FUCK MAN I LOVE THIS SHIP AND your writing is bomb as fuck my dude i love this amen god bless

Wow me encantó...tenia d todo...drama, romance, candente... Fic completo!

oh... my god... this is so... good...