I just wanted to comment and say that I have read this story every Christmas Eve since I discovered it in 2011. This year was no exception, I love it

Aww cute! :) I wish I'd seen it sooner!

yeesh totally predictable at least fist part with tje ghosts

Awwww!

Yay! I liked this story. It was very cute and the ending made me smile. Great job. :)

:3 Murrrrrrrr. (happy sound) BEAUTIFUL! There are no other words. It simple can not be described in words, it was too awesome! You hit another nail on the head my dear. :D

Yay! I am so happy that everything turned out great. So cute between J/C and their kid in the last chapter. I can't wait to read more stories from you.

Nicely written ending, beautiful as usual.

I especially loved this bit:

After a few moments, Arielle raised her eyes to look at him. "Daddy, will I ever be able to make something that doesn't explode?"

"Ari, you are named for one of the smartest people I ever knew. You've got my brains, and your mother's looks which I'm sorry for," he started.

"HEY! I heard that!"

-x-

That made me LOL but seriously, very cute! I hope you keep writing this year!

That was a nice ending. ) I think it was sweet that they named their daughter after his sister. )

Oh. Nicely wrapped up on this story, Katia. :D Really enjoyed it. Not much of that Jimmy/Cindy action nowadays, so it's good to see your stuff. Merry belated Christmas and happy holidays!

Fun fun. ) I hope he sweeps her off her feet! D

Great chapter and I am glad that Jimmy is willing to change. I am also happy he admitted his feelings about Cindy. I'm sure that seeing her with another guy was the straw that broke the camel's back. That and seeing people happy that he is dead. Can't wait for more.

Thanks for your review on my story.

This was beautiful writing right here! It broke my heart to see people talk about Jimmy like that and for Cindy to excuse hereof from going to his funeral because she was pregnant.

I love the emotions in your writing, and I can't wait for the update to see what happens in the next chapter..update soon please!

Oh golly gee! This was wonderful in every way! My only regret is that I didn't read it before Christmas! POO on toast! As per usual, the characters are in check and you nick the emotions down to an art. :D You are a superb writer my dear, and I just know you'll continue to do so, even when it doesn't feel like your art is being appreciated. It's in your blood, and you feel the itch to do it no matter what. :) And each one of your creations comes out in beautiful poise and perfect plot, description, and narration. It is perfect, just like you.

I love this so far! Keep writing, the chapter about Arielle, his sister really broke my heart...I can't wait for the future... have a definite feeling it's going to be Cindy!