That was so emotional. I just reread the fanfic, and I loved it so much! I'm pretty sure I'm speaking for all of us fans when I say that you need to post the sequel. I'm dying here! Curiosity killed the cat, y'know! But anyway, your style of writing and the plotline are gorgeous, though you should really space the lines more. I can't wait 'til the sequel, so please hurry with it! If you don't make it, I swear to all the monster lords, Shabranigdo, and even Ceipheed that I will HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE SURE YOU POST IT! 'Bye, y'all! *sparkly eyes*

Not to offend anyone, but the actual recital to Ra-Tilt is, "Dwelling within the eternal and the infinite, Source of all souls. Everlasting flame of blue, let the power hidden in my soul be called forth from the infinite...RA-TILT!"

Well, hello:) After another couple of years I returned to this fick to re-read it (again). I'm a little older now but still amazed at how good your writing skills are. I suppose that after so much time you won't write the second part and that's a pity, really:) It would be just like going back to my old childhood days. Damn I've got so nostalgic over the years!

Overall, after so many years I still love your work and hope to feel the same till the end of my days. Love from Poland;)

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE make the second part! This story was sooo good!

I'm really going to have to kill that Chimera... Kidding, sort of. I really like how you've brought in just how deeply obsessed he is finding with his cure in this story, it adds a really interesting flavour and how Amelia reacts to his obsession to finding his cure and how he puts that before his friends, before her.

Really well done!

I really adore this story, all the characters are in character. Seeing Zel struggle with his feelings for Amelia with him being a "monster" 'shakes head' Silly Zel.

Anyway, two lines in this made me laugh so hard.

'"Mattresses don't talk," Lina complained.' (I can so hear Lina saying this and it cracks me up)

and

'Not able to hold back, he yelled to her as she left the clearing, "Do you want me to clean my room as well, Mom?"

She screamed back, "Don't you start! And CHEER UP ALREADY!"'

It just made me laugh so hard.

Great Job so far!

I've read your fanfiction on your site. I didn't know you've posted it on ff. net! It's a really good storry, one of my favourite and I'm really happy that I can tell you that Keep on with the good work,. I will be looking forward to your next chapters. oh, yeah! I wanted to tell you that I was learning english reading your ficks a few years ago. Because of those ficks and my passion, now I can read english without any effort. Well.. I understand this fick but I can't talk very good, hehe. I'm not complayning, I'm only 15
Sorry for my writing, I'm not english but polish!

I really have to finish reading this...

Not the best I've ever read read but it was good . . . Keep up the Good work!

Shadow

wow that was a good story. poor zel though v.v...i just have one thing to say if you ever do a sequel or anything where you do have him turn human, his magic wouldn't be amplified from him being a chimera anymore BUT he would still be able to cast spells. after all, he learned them all on his own, etc. and it took years for him to learn.

Wow. This was quite a finish. Haunting, definitely, and begging for a continuation... I will most definitely pick up the sequel, whenever you have time to write it. The beginning scene in this chapter was very sweet; you write your characters well, and it's always nice to see how they interact.

It occurs to me that's it's difficult to write a story review with a movie blaring in the background. I'm gonna have to cut this a bit short... Good luck writing, and all. I look forward to seeing what you put out next.

a great fic that I'm following from the beginning...and at last the epilogue!

I was expecting this story to end, instead it's only part one of a trilogy...even better!

I'm waiting for One third demon, then!

Oh, man... I wasn't expecting that at the end! Post the next chapter soon! I need to know what happens!

This story is SO good! The way you've written Zelgadis' feelings is so... insightful. (Not sure if I'm using the right word here...) And the story is brilliant. It's going on my Favourites!

Wonderful chapter, as always. This was lovely; long, well-written, and quite angsty. I think I especially enjoyed the part where Zelgades was controlled, and Amelia had to watch. Very nice; shame Zel didn't quite get his cure though... Poor guy. And I look forward to seeing what part Xellos has in all this, too.