Reviews for Old Faces, New Tricks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() might have broken my face with how big of a smile i have going on right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oi, ironhair - grow up. I don't see you writing any stories with 50 chapters and 300,000 odd words. This girl has taken J.K's characters, and spun a completely and utterly brilliant story. Nearly every comment you've written has either been a backhanded compliment or negative, no constructiveness at all. If your getting a kick out of degrading someone's hard work, then you are a sad, sad person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written emotions and reactions most of the time... A good decent read, even if it lacked a lot of action typical in HP fics...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You didn't explain what lee was about to tell katie, nor did you reveal who was the mysterious father of spinnet's younger sister... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neville was regaling a bored looking Ginny.. Sould be Neville was trying to regale a bored looking Ginny You used that wrong, not that it really matters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh come on... Breaking the law..? And the kids are worried about it? When I was a kid, all I bothered about was getting hold of a keg or beer for me and my fiends, lol... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Basically you have every girl have two love interests and she strings one along while being wooed by one and then suddenly changes her mind after the first guy comes out with his feelings more clearly... How about changing it so that one of the guys has two girls pining over him...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha...hilarious! :). i already love it! i have read some of your other stories and i really like your writing style. can't wait to read more but i thought this deserved a review :)) |
![]() ![]() Im am really startung to hate Angelina here! |
![]() ![]() ahh poor georgie cant wait till oliver and alicia brake up! Cant wait to the yule ball! |
![]() ![]() Erica and Charlie are so perfect for each other that fiance was such a stuck up git like Alicia put it she better not marry him! Please Erica marry Charlie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much. How you've weaved a beautiful web of character relations is superb! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL ALREADY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks sooo much. I always thought the twins would be the people that take responsibility of their pranks and trouble making proudly though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! So I know I'm coming 6 years late but I'd like to say that I love your story, I haven't read a lot of stories with those characters and I think that they're not enough developped in the books so it was real great to read your story! I've actually read it in three weeks and seeing the length of your chapters it means a lot of sleeping hours missed I was like "oh this chapter is too long but I have to finish it" and when I did finish it I was like "Oh one more wouldn't hurt?". I'm gonna read the sequel now and I hope that it is as good as this! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonederfull, just a wonderfull story. I normally despise reading things without action...but you've written a marvelous story and that with side characters while giving it your own touch and...Just wonderfull.. Remember me, because one day that I'l have enough time off from college, I'l want to translate this to Dutch, if you'd allow me. With a heartfelt thenks for writing this story, DHPF |