This has to be my favorite story up to this point. Captivating, I couldn't put it down - and the affection and love between Mick and Beth so beautifully done.

Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Mick and Beth.

Just found this series and really enjoyed it. I hope you continue it as I would like to know what happens with Kira and Josef.

I told you after the first review, you would hear more about me, dont I say? So, here I am, again... kkkk

In someway I prefer Kira than Rayna. I think Kira is sweeter than Rayna, sometimes, I think Rayna its just a mischievous girl and although her past, appears Kira have more depth, have more soul. We dont know too much about her past, but I feel like she has a sad hide in her spirit. I dont know how to say it better and doesnt help try to say it in english, but... I hope you understood me. Anyway, I was happy for Kira ends with Josef. And I was touched for the kiss Beth gave on Josefs cheek. It was lovely. I miss the scenes between this two characters, I loved when it happened in the show, and they are friends too, isnt? Maybe in one of your stories, you could put more scenes like this, where them friendship shows up. Maybe Beth could call Josef to make a surprise for Mick or maybe she can ask Mick to help her play a trick on Josef. It would be very funny if for once the Josef was made a fool. I know that he would try to retaliate, and this would be a whole new fun. By the way, that is the reason why I loved your other story Chicken soup.

kisses,

Sandra

"Paranoia does seem to rule Josef's life" Love that line - and if you are ever casting about for inspiration for another story, there it is!

Good job tying everything up and sending your readers off happy! I know you hated ending this story, but now you'll be able to focus on the next one!

Keep writing,

North

This was a very good ending to a great story. This story felt like watching a new season of episodes. I know that I have said this before, but I still think that it's wonderful that we have writers like you who contune the story that we all know and love.

I wouldn't mind seeing a few more stories in this universe, because I would like to see how you would tackle the whole list story line. But, I would alos like a story that you have created in your first universe. I feel torn. But whatever you write will be wonderful I am sure.

Thank you for this wonderful ride, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Hi Jat, another great ending to another great story. Everyone is so happy, I loved it. Look forward to the next one. cheers penni :)

Very good story and I'm really glad you've left an opening for the next one with the tease of Ben's list. It's not so bad you're ending this one if I know you're plotting the next one. Thanks!

I really loved the end. I am so happy you are going to continue writing for Moonlight. It remains my favorite all time show and the stories here on the website keep it alive for me. I was happy that you included Simone in the ending and that she was also happy, and of course there is Talbot to deal with...maybe at a later date? Do you keep your two Moonlight worlds separate? Because later on Kira is not Josef's love. I look forward to your next story. Thanks for writing. You have such skill in writing the characters exactly as I would have seen them develop.

A lovely ending with just enought questions about the list. I always enjoy stories with Mick and Beth just starting their relationship.

Are you going to continue this plot line or go back to your other universe? Either one is great and love to read. We all need our Moonlight fix!

Thanks to you for your wonderful stories, and I,m very happy that you're thinking in your next story though a little sad that this story has finished.

Good chapter, I hope your next story shows us about the list and what would do Talbot about that.

I'll waiting patiently for your next story.

Nice wrap up to this storyline with a bit of a hint for more?

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Well done MJ54 I look forward to reading more of your fanfics!

As I wrote in another review, although the series didn't get the chance it deserved at least we have they wonderful well written and engrossing fanfics to keep us going and keep the memory of a series that should had at the very least a second season.

Thank you

Only one more chapter to go, uh, I do hope you’re planning to write a sequel to this one, there are a few things that don’t seem to be finished at this point, and I want to read MORE! It has been a fun and exiting ride and there’s one more chapter to go so that’s good! It really ended in a mysterious way, this chapter, hmmm, the list, who could be the one that is trying to reveal things about the vampires? It would be fun if you wrote a story about it and who you think it is! I loved the chapter and Josef is his usual cheeky self! I’m looking forward to the next one!

Hi, I want to tell you that I've read all your stories and I think they're fantastic, until yesterday I didn't have an account and you don't accept anonymous reviewers that's why I never reviewed your stories.

At least I will be able to review the last chapter of this story and all of your future stories that I hope there are plenty.

Sorry for my mistakes but English is not my first language.

How can you have only one more chapter to go? Did you write a story about when Karli met Josef? That was nice that he gave her the photo. I read this chapter a few days ago, but was too tired to write, and now, I read it again. The mysterious phone voice is egging Talbot on to discover what he must not discover. I can't wait to see how you tie this up without a sequel. Have a nice, productive writing weekend.