Please please continue writing this!

It was good. I personally like Noctis and Penelo but this was good.

... This is going to be hard for Ashe.. T.T

Whoa! I found this quite interesting!

if you looked at interviews of noctis they say hes no emo or a arrogant. hes shy and timid and try's act cool. hope that helps you with future Final Fantasy Versus XIII. any way its a good start. just wanted to help you to make future noctis fic. more on hes right personality. sorry if you already know. just helping My nature. i like this chapter keep up the good work.)

shy, timid, calm, rash , sometimes dosent know hes own power,

sorry if spelling bad in a rush on a date

Wait - how have I only just found this? Aha! I'm so glad to see this again :3.

Thankyou for the acknowledgement. I hope you're doing well and that your writing is going okay :).

Keep up the good work! :)

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omg it's really good!

plz update soon, i feel sorry for princess Ashe

interesting... so far i love it! keep updating :)