| Reviews for For I Am Captured Straight to You |
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  Cool chapter 7 . 12/20/2019 A nice little fluff peace with a good HEA. Nicely written. Good job. |
 AcetaBells chapter 7 . 3/23/2019 i really enjoyed reading this! honestly i thought it was gonna be a 3some by the description, but the friendship between embry and jacob made up for the lack of romance between them, lol. loved it, thanks for writing it! |
| RunsWithWolves77 chapter 7 . 1/10/2019 Very well written, not too long. Each chapter was meaningful, without a lot of filler. You fleshed out Jacob's character nicely. Glad he got his HEA. |
| RunsWithWolves77 chapter 1 . 1/9/2019 It's a good start. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. |
| TinaF chapter 7 . 11/10/2015 Loved it! |
| bryanareneea chapter 7 . 7/13/2015 That was so good! I love how everything just feel into place by the end. Thank you for writing this :) |
| writinchic chapter 5 . 8/27/2014 I am really starting to adore this story! |
| MarinaNamaste chapter 4 . 7/6/2014 Poor Jacob. Nothing else to say but poor jake. You write angst beautifully and I can't for the life of me understand why this story doesn't have more reviews. I think it's wonderful. |
| MarinaNamaste chapter 3 . 7/6/2014 Wow. What a great description of phasing! And now,with the pack mind, Embry will know everything. All of Jacob's sacrifices for him. Old and new. |
| MarinaNamaste chapter 2 . 7/6/2014 Well that was heart wrenching to read. Beautifully done. I loved the embrella bit. It was so funny. But I'm so filled with sadness from the second half of this chapter I can only just rembering just how funny and joyfully the first half was. Great writing. |
| MarinaNamaste chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 Loving this story. You're right inside the mind of a teenage boy. It's awsome. The angst is blissfully torture too. Now, off to chapter 2! |
| PastOneonta chapter 7 . 7/28/2013 Just wonderful, enjoyed this so very much. Jacob is amazing but your writing is the best. We can imagine the rest as they drive off into the sunset. |
| PastOneonta chapter 6 . 7/28/2013 I am with Jake, honesty is not necessarily the best policy. Bella picked Embry and then had to tell him everything?! I guess it brings Jake's feelings into the open. How did Leah know? Need more Leah! Leah is great! And then Jake has to share it all with the Pack! As much as Jake feels like a girl, he's not, he's a really good person in a tough situation. I love the journal. |
| PastOneonta chapter 5 . 7/28/2013 Sad and sweet. Jacob is miserable and just wants to be happy again. Bella feels guilty and just wants her friend. Embry is worried and just wants to know that Bella will love him forever. I wonder if Jake should have told Bella the whole truth. She should know how he feels. But he's been hurting for so long he wants to avoid more hurting. It could be even worse for him. |
| PastOneonta chapter 4 . 7/28/2013 I laughed out loud at parts of this but had tears at other parts. Jacob phasing in front of Bella allows her to know the secret, and as expected, she's cool with it. I didn't expect that she would be back with Embry immediately but she is forgiving and she does care for him. I hurt for Jake as they were in his shower. The thoughts of the wolves while phased was very well written. You can follow the Paul thoughts and Embry thoughts and Jake trying to block his thoughts and tune out theirs. Paul thinking Jake was just a dumbass because of his humming was funny. What is Jake writing? And how is he doing, watching Bella back with Embry? |
