This is really a beautiful masterpiece. So lovely yet incredibly sad!

I am still waiting for the next chapter!
I love it so much

Will this be continued?

(Please let it be~)

XXX
Sayo

This is supposedly a Kaishin/Kaicon fic...and yet Matsumi Sera is a character... WHY?
It makes it confusing when you're searching for a Kaishin fic... so I suggest you change it if it's an honest mistake...

update please?

Wow... very nice angst. I hope you update this... There were no grammar errors that I saw. So far, as much as I can tell in a chapter, VERY good.

Oh, OH. Please, keep this up!

How I love the angst here. There are a couple typos, and there's an overuse of comma sequences - though I definitely understand how easy it is to fall into the repetitive sentence structure when writing angst. I suggest re-wording:

"It was then Conan realized how much he needed Kid – the attention, the chase, the smiles, the laughter, the warmth..."

"He didn't want to see the hurt, the loss, the brokenness, displayed in those violet, violet eyes."

BUT, do keep this:

"And Kid, who was everything, who was the world, dappled in blue-grey rays, darting in the shadows, soaring in the sky, dancing on the rooftops..." - This line is so gorgeous and so resonant precisely because of its syntax, but I believe it'd be even more powerful if the other comma sequences were shortened or written differently.

I want more i want MORE! Man i love your since in stories! Or maybe i just love drama and angst so much Hmmm... Whatev! I was right to check more of your stories they seem supberb I love your style! though i admit i sometimes get confused at the begining of who'point of view it is but i have no place to say that! Hehehe.. Anyways keep up the good work, sorry scratch that, the GREAT AMAZING piece of art

It's sooo sad, but well written. I kinda like how it ends! 3 Poor Conan -.-"

this sounds so sad and bitter... really painful! I hope to read more soon because I just can't accept this being left like this... *sniffles*

This is really beautiful, even though it is so sad that it makes me want to cry. Looking forward to the other part-whether it ends happily or makes me want to cry again.