Keep it going please, I want to know what happens to Sam! He is a beast!

Maybe a little late but how bout an update

i suppose that things are less interesting when sam just solves all the problems

why does the wander need backup for this? he's skilled enough to stroll into the fort and give caesar a close shave, i doubt that some powder gangers could even scratch him

i guess you cant thwart stage one, i wonder if the good doctor knew sam's parents?

nice take on the wanderer, i wonder if anyone had him go to vegas just because he wanted to gamble?

while, i'm not exactly thrilled about you turning the courier into a morphine (Med-X) addict, mainly i have to question your logic regarding the lone wanderer. you have him traveling 3000 miles, all the way to the other side of the country to find out about Vault 21. to then not question Doc Mitchell after finding out he's from there. then to decide not to go to vegas to fulfill the goal he went to the west coast to accomplish in the first place. oh, and this is in addition to the Mojave brotherhood having no clue about him despite the fact that he hitched a ride with people specifically out to contact the mojave chapter.

Excellent story i really hope you continue this

Awesome story, especially with the 4 horsemen of the apocalypse part, very interesting characters. Anyways, i was wondering if you will add any of the DLC's to the story?

Yikes, just this first chapter was a monkey-cheese trainwreck.

I don't mean to be a dick but here's my honest review:

I love your writing style. Some of your original dialogue is very good. Keep in mind, I've read the very beginning of this story and may finish it.

The points I'm going to make really stood out to me:
Boone is the type that keeps everything to himself. Yet, he confesses he killed his wife and Bonnysprings to a pair he's wandered with for less than a week as if he's on Oprah. Plus, he kind of talks too much for his type. It's your interpretation of him, but I wanted to throw it out there.

Then its strange to me how Beth, a complete stranger to The King, is just given a mission out of all the people The King has working for him.

Some of the action sequences in your story end anti-climatically. Like the abrupt ending between Sam and Tabitha's fight. Also, try spacing out the sentences in your action sequences out a bit. It sometimes leaves me skipping lines, or just getting bored.

Lastly, other pieces of dialogue are just too easy for the pair. Betsy, for example, had a firm No. Sam says she hurts the team and she suddenly is convinced to go seek help. I understand it hit something but it wasn't exactly strong. Then Beth with Otis. She says she'd rat him out so he automatically dumps caps on the floor and he and his friends walk away. His "I guess I got lucky?" line seemed very uncertain for a guy who has been doing it to many, many people. He should've been calm about it, or else many people would've noticed he'd be on the point of confession, thus negating the quest entirely.

I'm sorry if I'm being too critical but I see so much potential here. I honestly want this story to be the best it can be but to do that, some changes from before and from the future need to be implemented, like a bit more details on setting.

-M.A. Cunningham

Good story though I would think the LW would repair his blackhawk instead of tossing it aside... you know. Being a named one of a kind .44 magnum. Don't know if its just me, but the LW seems a bit too docile/nice.

Will this ever be updated?

The type of person I feel like you're portraying her as doesn't seem likely to have sex for someone else. Shoot them, sure, but fuck them? I think she'd see that as demeaning, perhaps even prostiting herself.

wow quite a cliffhanger cannot wait for the next chapter.