beautiful!

Another fantastic climax. To the story, I mean!

Seriously though, that was sweet. Atta boy, Shippou.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! My heart will go on no jutsu!

To put it simply, love it!

I don't know if you're still reading the reviews on some of your older, complete stories but I was wondering if you could replace this chapter with a modified one. Nothing big, just breaking up those REALLY big paragraphs. I kept losing my place and it was kind of annoying.

Yeah just wanted to throw that out there so it could benefit possible future readers of this particular fanfic...though in all actuality you might want to be careful in the future or look back through some of your more popular fanfics and modify the huge paragraphs too. I don't mean to be one of those nit-picking critics but you got to admit, losing your place 5 times trying to read one paragraph is pretty annoying. I guess what I'm trying to say is keep an eye out for massive paragraphs and break them up once in awhile.

How can anyone write with a straight face?

Brilliant as always,

Thanks for being inspiration when I need it too. :)

Beautiful. It was realistic and romantic, as all such stories should be 3

Another brilliant masterpiece well done! I love how you wrote Kagome's character; how brazen yet so confident when confessing to him and especially when she put his hand on her, to make him realize. I loved that! Your love scenes between these two or so deep and so realistic its unbelievable! I can't get enough of it! The love scenes of this story and Twice Bitten are perfect! They're both beautiful! Again, the flow and detail you give to your works are absolutely astounding, just so well written it leaves me in awe!

Inu/Kag Forever! Ja Ne!

So adorible :) amazingly writen! I think you should continue it and add when Miroku and Sango find out or something like that. That would be awsome!

I liked the part that you put about the rosary at the end. so cute and tender! I love it!

How cute! I really liked how you wrote it.I completely understood it and it was easy for me to picture in my mind. It was so adorable and hopefully you write more! I would love to read kore of what happens and how it progresses well hopefully right. So keep up the good work

This was adorable. And when they made love, that was just beautiful.

Wonderful job.